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Thread: Kritikal Damage DISS....By Brooklyn Bob

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    Kritikal Damage DISS....By Brooklyn Bob

    Yo B.K BOB told me to post this…and he told me to say he HAD a pic of Kritikal and a pic of the kid from home alone in his sig (he said they looked alike) and most of this is based around that…
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    Look at your pic – your ass couldn’t look scary in a Jason Mask
    With a A.K 47 and a bag of fucking Anthrax……….
    You aint even close to Kritikal – Haha, your pitiful,
    I can’t battle you I’m too busy laughin at your physical
    Do you lack creativity? – coz you keep sayin ‘nigga’
    When your white as fuck – there was proof in my sig, ha..
    Your punches wont HIT so what you gonna do to me?
    Coz it’s plain to see you haven’t even HIT puberty
    My sig sent my message like a mobile phone
    You look the little boy – in ‘home alone’


    Aaah…man

    PEACE
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    Keep in mind I didn’t write this

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    I think it could be longer.
    Im not good judgeing disses,but i guess this was okay..
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    NOTHING WILL STOP MY ACHE!
    I WANNA FUCK ALL THIS SHIT I HAVE TO TAKE!!
    My enlightened state of mind my desperate DECISION!
    I find serenity in so much,pain,
    Slit my wrists and let my body,drain,
    Clench my fists and let my life slip,away,
    Cuz' only she can stop all this,pain,
    And only she can stop this fucking,pain,
    I just wish these sick thoughts would..GO AWAY
    And fucking stop the ache thats down deep inside.-Suicide of The Cephalo Pictorial

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    Im gonna climb the empire state building-
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    well, this diss could've been TREMENDOUSLY better, it lacked creativity, punches, and assets of a well written rhyme, not bad, but room for improvement.

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