damn.....ima be rusty as shyt
10 lines
house rules
due 24 hours after check
g' luck
gemneye
Makeveli Trained
damn.....ima be rusty as shyt
10 lines
house rules
due 24 hours after check
g' luck
- King Tone
24 hrs for 10lines?? damn homie, you dyslexic or somethin?
check
^^^^fuck are you talkin about, i didnt know if i'd have time to post or not tonight......................
Centipede game Gem, I’ll run circles round u cuz no1 feels ya text drops
When it comes 2 pussy, ya scared to Eat Out like a fear of Restaurants
This battle……it’ll End Quick, kinda like a Britney Spears Marriage
This kid cant keep up w/ me, watch me lose em like a miscarriage
When it’s trouble he runs, n brags about skills he hasn’t harnessed yet
I told em’ to Eat His Heart Out n the bitch quickly Starved to Death
Your fake Gem, he cant breach my level, the worst to type text
Like bitches Runnin from Cops, Gemneye needs to give hes shyt A-Rest (Arrest)
I’ll fuckin take ya lungs a way like kataracks, til it’s lungs you miss
Voters expected 2 dope verses, so I’ll post another after im done w/ this
- King Tone
aight....lets get this goin..
Your lyrics are luggage, busted and fat like packed jelly
You need to lipo that shit or go run track Makeveli
He's just a kid with no chin pubes, still stickin' grits to a tissue
Showin' off how he can spit but got no stitches from fist feuds
Get ripped like generic tenni-shoes, dont give a piss just to diss you
Like pepsi caps when I twist you off and get the win when it's issued
Your raps are dried out and nappy like the top of a black chick
You try to pretty it wackly, got more 'weave' than dogs caught in traffic
Youre talkin 24 hours to drop a verse, bitch be pushy
Cuz your raps are blowin' more smoke than Ms.Lewinskys pussy
yea, i took 24 hours but posted before you......herb
w/e tho, uppin
- King Tone
wtf ever dude, quit your fucking swaying...I just checked it a couple minutes ago cuz you said you was gonna take all day..you aint THAT mutha fuckin good train bang.
aight lets get straight to da beef. makeveli. kuel flow. aight structure. good vocabulary. not too many punches though. bunch of nonsense. punch da player. not bout how ur gonna cut him up. elevate man. and u'll be ill. 5/10
not bad gemneye. good structure. good flow. sum pretty good punches. work on da vocabulary and u'll own dis shit. 7/10
v//Gemn
Come check out my battles that need to be closed. specially like my one against D-bate. ill battle. i'm out peace.
Good flows on both, but gemneye would take my vote. Better punches and the lines flowed together better.
hella great battle:
gem-
great flow, love ur style, u rip cats w/o even try'n, man u need sum compitition...
"He's just a kid with no chin pubes, still stickin' grits to a tissue
Showin' off how he can spit but got no stitches from fist feuds"
"Youre talkin 24 hours to drop a verse, bitch be pushy
Cuz your raps are blowin' more smoke than Ms.Lewinskys pussy"
makevelli-
iight shit man,up ur level dawg, structure ok, rhyme's iight
"Centipede game Gem, I’ll run circles round u cuz no1 feels ya text drops
When it comes 2 pussy, ya scared to Eat Out like a fear of Restaurants"
"This battle……it’ll End Quick, kinda like a Britney Spears Marriage
This kid cant keep up w/ me, watch me lose em like a miscarriage"
v/gemneye
uppin1......