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Thread: Animal (jada diss 50 beat) (Mainevent diss)

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    Animal (jada diss 50 beat) (Mainevent diss)

    yeah! Long Island, Strong Island im from all voer new york homie.. whea you from? you aint never throw ya hood up

    why you keep comin back/
    if ya raps is ass dawg, you shud really wipe ya crack/ (ahA)
    you a hustla, a mill you cant cook or cut/
    the only tiem you i nthe kitchen is to get some grub/
    dumb nigga youre punch lines wont make the front lines/
    i jsu say fuck it all coem thru ya hood and buck nines/
    you be duckin and trippin,/
    when the guns coem out, ya homies dead cuz they gun be slippin/
    and this shit here is real dawg,/
    been paroled since mike tyson bit that ear off/
    im 19 been hustlin fo four years/
    in and out the box but i paid for good lawyers/
    ya rhyme schemes dumb stupid/
    cuz u dont even rhyme so you might as well dont do it/
    this dumb kid thinks he tough/
    wastin my time on the computer, dint you get enough?/
    and i wanna handle it street,/
    so tell me yo hood at ill dismantle you in ya street/
    i dont give a fuck bout mac/
    cuz when im rollin around i always got 2 streetsweeps i nthe back/
    you be chillen with the duds and tricks/
    im fa real dawg be chillen with the bloods and crips/
    so watch fo' i give you a leak/
    and slap you so hard you wont no what hit you for a week/

    youz a animal youza bitch you a animal

    dumb ass nigga you a animal dumb nigag you a animal


    (bring me to the fortn lines, pussy im tryna write full pieces on open mic and these lil niggas talkin, they aint hood, beef is all about bein hood son, you aint hood, whea you throw up you niggas aint ever thrown it up)






    ((wish i knew how to do a fuckin audio))

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    I'm gettin sick n tired of youw ack cats makin disses. When the beat its self could merk you.

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    that shti was hot idiot.. i wanna brign this shit to the front lines yo if not ima jsu keep droppin pieces... this nigga loves actin lie khe big, we online nigga give it up i been tried to give it up ery1 no my shit sbetter then youre shit.. mainevent.. pussy ass frontin bitch

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    proper mistreatment on the diss......u handle your self well...........tight shit stay at it...but check this shit out........


    Second time around now what yall think

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    It was tight i chould tell you were with the beat
    maybe your flow was a bit off but thats not too bad
    nice stuff man
    you ahve merked mainevent every fucking time
    from the first freestyle you did
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    Originally Posted by Murkage
    lol..im loving this

    serves you right for fucking wit me slide, and i did nothing to you....
    i am a nice guy serious..

    and i think your maturity level is 000000.1 after this eminem incident..
    and you were dissing my audios lol.....the nerve of this bitch
    well ive reported you..you will be banned..
    now fuck off!
    Aw shit this guy has dirt on you! dont fuck wit him!

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    werd up good loosk nigga

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    Ill say it was iight

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    werd stil luppin

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    don 't forget your links...

    but anyways.. there was no stand-out lines in this, it seemed basic, try using wordplay/nameplay, harder punches.. it would make this a much better read, better yet try a different topic.. structure was kinda.. sloppy? but everything seemed to flow ok, this was nothing special, punches werent hard hitting.. keep at it, try different topics, try expanding your vocab, it 'll give you more space to get creative/complex with your lines...

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    I didnt like this much ..


    .. either record it in audio, or leave off with pieces like this. The rhymes were madd basic, the disses werent really hard hitting, the flow was fairly easy to follow - but again, without the beat, its just words on a screen to me. You should of took this to FrontLines and just settled it there. Pieces like this are ten a penny here, write something original and i'll break it down further.


    Pz!

    WORD P e r f e c t !


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    It was alright nothin spectacular tho
    But yeah you should have taken this to frontlines

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    uh ok i guess fuck 50 tho

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    yo that was alright like good job forsure

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    you need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    it was a little nice not that good of a diss but it was alight .
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