cats walk around the school holding they nose up/
they see you on the street turn all froze up/
i guess that's how you tell a fake from a G/
cause if they were real they be posted on the block like me/
hand on the bundle and my G-A-T/
ready to catch a hustler on that R-O-B/
that's how i be, strictly gangsta/
no time for fighting so i'ma shank ya/
cats talk hard around the corner, run from the block/
cause they know my aim steady the way i walk with the glock/
LET ME GET SOME FEEDBACK ON THIS
TOP GUN
DOUBLE DUCE YOU'LL LEARN
nice man spellin dat shit makes it sound so tight
make it a bit longer and add a lil more flo a beat and you got a rap
keep da shit gangster good work man.
Last edited by CdoubleG; March 29th, 2005 at 06:07 PM
how would u know wats poppin in school if u always on the block.anyway keep writing cuz that was kinda whack.
thnx for the feedback but i got clients in school so i gotta be there for the business plus they don't teach to much in school
TOP GUN
DOUBLE DUCE YOU'LL LEARN
I see you on gangsta rap.
That aint my style but I respect that.
It was mad basic nah mean?
You can be on gangsta shit but be creative with it.
Do somethin that nobody else doin nah mean?
do plenty more lines then that and add a chorus.
Since you might be a anthem rapper.
Keepin writin though,I wasn't feelin it that much.
ps.you gonna have to drop links yo.
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