Da Rhytmagician vs. Multiman

[Da Rhythmagician]

20 lines
house rules
1 verse a piece
no dickridin
no crew votes

[Da Rhythmagician]

iight spit dawg lez go
verse due in 45 min.

[Multiman]

buddy, I already layed the rules in my callout, 10-14 lines

alright???

['--'Taser.--.]

o0o0o0o0o he told you...............................

[Da Rhythmagician]

iight datz cool jus spit 1st
10 -14 lines iz good

[Multiman]

I'll make you dissapear like a magician cuz your a whack trick
make you back flip It's like I got cancer, I'm just that sick
you wanna win this? NO way yo this gon be a quick K-O
you gettin beatin like you was will smith I'm tony Yayo
thats 2 bars I already won this kick you in the stomach
Put you in the hospitalmake you lose all battles from it
fuckin poser, wit the game and outkast signature pics
your like paper, ripped gettin busted in the lip QUICK
your too scared to show your ugly face and I can tell
shit I bet after 1 session your webcam uninstalls it self
I took it easy on you tried like 1 fourth of my ability
I still advise you not to throw ya weak ass skill at me

Finisher:
It's over kid and it's inevitable that you had no chance dude
you a rhythmagician, quit rap and learn some more dance moves

Explanation

-his name is Da Rhythmagician and rhythm is needed in orded to dance
-magician/magic trick
-his sig has pictures of other rappers, and not himself
- ipeepd one of his other battles, wasnt feelin it!!

uppin on yo verse kid?

[Multiman]

just a quick keystyle, you better not take much longer

[Da Rhythmagician]

Im outta his league, like seeds tryina take marijuana’s prestige/
This herb aint dope! Ya words don’t even match up to one leaf/
Spits seductive? Makes sense, DOE BAGZ beggin for a striptease/
Fuck spittin, to defeat your keys all I need to do is sneeze!/
Can you compete? guess not! ya verse juss spells out defeat/
Im heat, my text splits ya beats when my arrangement of letters meet/
Im proving you aint king, this quickthings already got ya drooling/
Ya got me snoozing, Ill give this wannabe a lesson in veterinary schooling/
‘This’ ‘punk’ ‘sits’ ‘here’ ‘with’ ‘his’ ‘book’ ‘of’ ‘puns’ ‘but’ ‘ his’ ‘styles’ ‘decayed’/
You gay, AINT YOU HEARD THAT YOUR WORDPLAY IS JUST PLAYED!/
I drop shit like im excretin, dish a few lessons to this uneducated cretin/
You searing? Couldn’t drop hot shit if you mishandled central heatin/
Cant drop keys like they stuck on a ring, wont see tomorrow ‘ding ding’/
Rockin a paperclip necklace is the closest you'll ever get to even fake bling/
Im bringin heat, my words hittin are parallel to devilry photosynthesisin/
He thought i was gonna lose this battle but he dont kno im good at conivin/

[Da Rhythmagician]

Im outta his league, like seeds tryina take marijuana’s prestige/
This herb aint dope! Ya words don’t even match up to one leaf/
Spits seductive? Makes sense, MULTIMAN beggin for a striptease/
Fuck spittin, to defeat your keys all I need to do is sneeze!/
Can you compete? guess not! ya verse juss spells out defeat/
Im heat, my text splits ya beats when my arrangement of letters meet/
Im proving you aint king, this quickthings already got ya drooling/
Ya got me snoozing, Ill give this wannabe a lesson in veterinary schooling/
‘This’ ‘punk’ ‘sits’ ‘here’ ‘with’ ‘his’ ‘book’ ‘of’ ‘puns’ ‘but’ ‘ his’ ‘styles’ ‘decayed’/
You gay, AINT YOU HEARD THAT YOUR WORDPLAY IS JUST PLAYED!/
I drop shit like im excretin, dish a few lessons to this uneducated cretin/
You searing? Couldn’t drop hot shit if you mishandled central heatin/
Cant drop keys like they stuck on a ring, wont see tomorrow ‘ding ding’/
Rockin a paperclip necklace is the closest you'll ever get to even fake bling/
Im bringin heat, my words hittin are parallel to devilry photosynthesisin/
He thought i was gonna lose this battle but he dont kno im good at conivin

Messed up in 1st spit
had ta rewrite a couple of wrds
srry fa gon ova da line limit
my bad i just need 2 extra lines

[Da Rhythmagician]

dont pay no mind ta ma first spit iight
just read da 2nd one

[Da Rhythmagician]

ppl give feedback on dis battle
come on
votes n feedback ya;ll
we bof need ta elevate

[Multiman]

aight cool, you shouldnt have gone over the line limit though and had to repost it that should be a DQ right there bt I'm anice guy, lol

uppin on votes and yeah I didnt really try my hardest

UPPIN

[Da Rhythmagician]

thanx fa undersatndin multiman
yo uppinfa votes n feedback ya'll
tyte battle ppl
vote and give feedback so we can elevate

[AL CAPONE]

Rhyth good vocab long lines but u didnt pack punches need to work on dat everythin else is aight overall- 5.0/10
multiman-nice punces and closer need to work on flow and vocab u need to elevate a little more be a little more creative overall-3.5/10
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[Da Rhythmagician]

thanx fa da vote dawg