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    ..::~GhOsT~::..
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    _the Real Streetz_

    My life is Pitiful and so Dispicable, Spewin hatred like it was Rainin Vomit

    My Name Is Honest, I dealt with roccs so big they was claimed as comets

    I done seen Explosives & Gats, and Knew dirty fighters who used Corossives In Scraps

    Along with lonely fuccin people with no room mates except the Roaches & Rats

    Plus all the Crews That I Messed With, Were broken up or Usually Arrested

    So I stayed shallow and chilled with whores who were Brutally Molested

    Robbed at gun point, I Pulled deals off with morons who were Sorta Clumsy

    But I Never called crime stoppers on partners to poccet Rewards & Money

    Been doin Scams With Children, From this Abandon Buildin

    We'd kill ya best friend for 10 Dollars then ask Wheres Ya Mans Chillin

    In my mindstate I had no problem with Stabbin Some Lids

    Head Abdomen or Ribs...I've Even fucced bitches with more diseases than African Kids

    A psychotic druggy..resembling .Satans son I was here Pairin wit Evil

    I was barely even legal..muh best friends were like a Herion Needle

    On drugs but my bouts were classic, No matter who they got there ass kicked

    I Told the police I didnt see anything, Speakin with a tounge full of acid

    Only food I ever ate I Took from Shops...or Donuts from a Crooked Cop

    Feelin like I wanted to kill everyone everytime I Looked at a Glocc

    Sometimes It Felt so Weird, inside Ii had This sort of Selfish Fear

    But no idea who I'd see.. if I looked myslef in the mirror

    I hated to love the streets, I had shades of True Knowldge

    Not seein me Pace Through College, I Majored in drugs Laced With Shoe Polish

    So Now I Gotta let people know the truth,

    Im Not some punk who's Speech Is Lame

    Just spend the night on my blocc...

    If its really the Streets You Claim
    Last edited by ..::~GhOsT~::..; April 10th, 2005 at 03:14 PM

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    yo that alright maybe elavet little bit but gppd job

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    Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//cass lit they ass just to let them know u aint playin witem
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    yo thats some ill shit u need to elevate little in ur punches nice lines good vocab and word structure keep it up overall- 6.0/10 need to improve ok

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    This was a good piece the flow made it stand out, the structure and vocab were fine. It was kind of a deep topic and there was some nice raw lines in there i liked it.

    Return the favour.
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    Very nice piece here..I like the punches and the flow went really well dawg...keep that shit up
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