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    Newbie SJ.King's Avatar
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    The Introduction

    SJ.King- Intro
    man i come through hard, im bold
    slap a nigga so hard dat his silver turn gold
    my ice is so expenssive that its freezin cold
    ill slap u from young to old
    im either tellin u or its been told

    im brave im confident so i puff my chest
    im not average man im the best
    i have higher expectations so i settle 4 nuthin less
    u can call me a nerd cuz i got an A on every test

    all of yall should know my name
    all the girls play my games
    u mad? im not the 1-2 blame
    u dont understand let me try 2 explain

    i tell u ill make u shiver
    when i show u my bullets of silver
    like a mailman i will deliver
    ill bury u like lost treasure

    yo this is my 1st freestyle
    and no i didnt copy from 8 mile
    i've been doing this 4 a while
    if u think im whack u probably hit ur head on the tile.

    a girl will always say yes neva no
    have a bitch singing omarions "O"
    in my room ill tell a girl 2 get low
    i think im bou 2 bust in 1,2,3,4

    sorry i couldnt make it 2-5
    but i almost made cuz of my drive
    have a bitch feel my vibe
    ima tell da truth i aint gone lie
    The Champ The One The Kingxxxxxxxxx
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    -Broken Swordz-
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    This was a good start for a newb, Work on your Storytelling and flow and stay up man

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    Our For Revenge.... ..Vendetta..'s Avatar
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    Uhm Man This Was A Good Piece I Guess, Lol Structure Was Fucked Though And Leave Your Links To
    Still Out For Revenge....

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    -Broken Swordz- , STFu your rap games sucks dick dont call him a newb...

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    I sing the body electric. Maven.'s Avatar
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    dude.
    this was....whack.

    On this site, if you're gonna rap all gankstuh and shit, at least make it funny and clever. otherwise, write about something that means something to you. Everything else comes afterwards.
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    '--'Taser.--.
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    -Broken Swordz- , STFu your rap games sucks dick dont call him a newb...

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    1 open mic per day.

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