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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    crashing wordperfect

    Hook:
    Now I seen it all... never backed down from a war even if I knew id fall
    I’m a man all I have in this life is my word and my balls
    So you will never get the pleasure of seeing me turn bitch
    If I die when the beef ends they'll burry me with half of you in the same ditch
    I’d even sell my soul to the devil if you want to get on that level
    And live off the hate internal for eternal cause this shit wont ever be settled.

    Verse 1:

    You not on my level fuck it you not in my orbit
    The shit that got me… is you asked your crew to get your back only to forfeit.
    What’s got to suck is that my boys got my back and I didn’t ask for it.
    Now I got 4 of my twins resulting to murder 4 times as morbid.
    Talk all your shit to prove you hype but my skills are acknowledged
    And I read K9'S diss its obvious you cats aint dropping NA~LEDGE
    Lets get it right none of you is tight you aint the shit just skids
    Plus your reunion will last about as long as epmd's did
    Let me tell the truth.
    I aint got no beef with Chrit but I do with that lil bitch
    Camarac so I guess im a leave everyone pist for riding his dick.
    Damn Chrit I give you respect but your wack attack defines shitty
    And anyone who thinks your verse is better then mine must want self pity.
    You aint been a crew for a while now and you still think you that hard?
    Fuck your rep your rusty and need a 12-step program to remember to drop hard.
    I spit the kind of shit to split your wisdom like extracting your molar
    we wouldn’t be cool if I had deep thermia with bipolar
    .Call beef and attack me sub par you must be some fucking retards
    Saying you raw but having your crew diss me just proves how weak you really are.
    Claim the name but you know you aint repping it true.
    And if I wanted proof id ask a gynecologist to see the pussy in you.
    Fuck CAM im leaving him scorn
    expose the bitch in him when I leave his rib torn
    have him swallowed instead of born
    his frail skills are a weak tease like cinemax porn.
    I swear to god if you worth my time I better get paid by the minute fuck
    An hourly rate…. par…
    Cause like loosing your virginity in prison… you get raped behind these bars.
    And I try to be humble even though I know they praying I stumble
    I’ll leave you on the news more than Bryant Gumble.
    rip the English language inflict damage with above average slang
    Nah you aint asian or on cash money but you feed your bitch lil wang.
    These kids fired and missed with they weak diss
    That would leave R.KELLY saying they aint worth a piss.
    You finished and fans don’t need the 6th sence to realize
    If you really are wordperfect then your system aint optimized.
    So fuck you your crew and even one of your rhymes
    Are you men or mice? Wait I can tell by them cheesy ass lines.

    Hook:
    Now I seen it all... never backed down from a war even if I knew id fall
    I’m a man all I have in this life is my word and my balls
    So you will never get the pleasure of seeing me turn bitch
    If I die when the beef ends they'll burry me with half of you in the same ditch
    I’d even sell my soul to the devil if you want to get on that level
    And live off the hate internal for eternal cause this shit wont ever be settled.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    that was tight.
    you have a lot of punch lines an metaphores
    we gonna a lot of that to get these bithces off our heels.
    but theyer so stupid i doubt the beefs ever gonna end

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    Quote Originally Posted by noncentz(word~p)
    Are you men or mice? Wait I can tell by them cheesy ass lines.
    you want to call our lines cheesy...with the cheesiest line I've ever seen.

    Dude, if you're gonna write a diss, at least use your fucking head. There was nothing even close to insulting, funny or personal in this entire thing. Put a little effort in, at least.
    wordperfect?
    ..o0Pure0o..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Maven
    you want to call our lines cheesy...with the cheesiest line I've ever seen.

    Dude, if you're gonna write a diss, at least use your fucking head. There was nothing even close to insulting, funny or personal in this entire thing. Put a little effort in, at least.
    FUCK YOU BITCH YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOU TALKING ON TAKE YOUR ASS ON.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    nice verse work on ur vocab and word structure need to elevate on that liked ur flow and lines just work on that and ull elevate overall rate- 5.0/10

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    Shit was fire fam..consistant punches and metaphors..tite personals...nice vocab as usual..niggas need to stop condemnin this shit, I'm quite sure that the SAME niggas that u beefin wit now was the SAME niggas was givin you props on ya shit at on point and time in the past. Its funny how they got they whole crew dissin one person...wut happened to the one on one type deal. You got this shit in the bag man. Keep doin you

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    lol it was a good untill the last 2 bars

    The mice part was just funny...I was like hahaha omg come on

    The rest was good though...dont stretch ur lines so much

    6.5/10

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    that was aight... at first i was bored with it but its cool... work on shortenin your lines and throwin more punches playa... 4.5/10
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    uppin atleast u like the content
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Its was hot. I know a bunch of ppl already gave their opinion, but nice punches and flow was good. Overall-Hott

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    hopefully with something better then that first shit you dropped
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    some pretty strong punches in this man, i see you're getting geared up for some serious warfare. if you wanna take on the crew, i'll happily battle one of them in a topical, i need to keep my skills sharp! the hook seemed a little stretched but overall it was a pretty strong diss piece.

    keep on posting.

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