aight you didnt specify rules.. so here goes.
10-16 lines.
house rules,
30 mins to drop
check in so i know your gonna drop..
plz dont no show, i get that a lot
good luck
aight you didnt specify rules.. so here goes.
10-16 lines.
house rules,
30 mins to drop
check in so i know your gonna drop..
plz dont no show, i get that a lot
good luck
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checkin in now man...............................check in quick
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blah kid gets an extension untill he gets out of work
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Your temptin fate in this battle, & all your punches missed...
& Abstract's a threat to your record,...pity it doesnt exist...
living like 99% percent of kids, exists to make up the numbers,...
& aby not your generic cat, this dopeness only comes 1 in a hundred...
credit where credits due,he's got the balls to contend.....
But just because you fell off,..depict's your a ledge-end?...
Duke's dope as fuck, just look at your multies,.. there real nice,...
Well that is if you count a multi as, using the word 'that' twice... (check sig)
& success comes at a price, but kid's just getting chewed...
Cuz im serving this bitch, and he's just serving the food... (check his occupation)
But times up,.. face it.., kid try to comprehend,...
Cuz as he reads my closer,......
................................... he came to a sticky end...
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keyed this shit up quick, just waitin till kid gets outa work ...hurry up son...peace
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im back phew i left work early cuz they cancelled the shit ya kno then i finished JollyRogers weak ass off O and i read ya shit i like'd it much love and nice with the personals but ya kno no hard feelins....this is my check in
look ima spit second cuz niggas feed like a lyrical leech
he's mad cuz he's not taken serious like a figure of speech
but i aint even gotta prove that this nigga is weak
cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat
im like damn was 10 2 16 to much to handle
you wanna see a fucked up verse yours is a perfect example
played concepts like gun metal, you homos are endless
make claims of bare'n arms like the second admendment
you rip me?........................ naw you wont desect shit
i'll eat this cat like leavin B-n-J (Ben & Jerry) wit a fat depressed bitch
now my conclusion this nigga's losin for dropin that whack shit
if you aint no freestyler y the fuck would you blind spit
bitch you got here by mistake lookin for sounds of birds chirppin
i was ask'd to join this site you made it here by web surfin
goes to shou that wit mistakes i'll be whitin'em out
cuz i've been through more trash then Oscar the Grouch
iight people vote............................sorry Abstract took so long we can do it again if you want another time iight ~1~
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
uppin for votes............................................. .....................................
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
lol 16 exactly, aight nice drop, goodluck...upping 1
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yea cuz where im from its always 16 lines or 8 bars so im kinda custom to that tradition while up here its like 10 and 12 to 14 and shit like that im not use to that ya kno well ne ways uppin for votes............................................. ....
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
uppin 4 votes.
and by the way before he changed it, his sig was reppin a verse that he made up that rhymed the word 'that' with itself, also before he changed his occupation in his profile it said he was a proffesional banquet server, peace....
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Abstract -
Your temptin fate in this battle, & all your punches missed...
& Abstract's a threat to your record,...pity it doesnt exist...
...lol good opener
living like 99% percent of kids, exists to make up the numbers,...
& aby not your generic cat, this dopeness only comes 1 in a hundred...
...nice
credit where credits due,he's got the balls to contend.....
But just because you fell off,..depict's your a ledge-end?...
...not really feelin this one
Duke's dope as fuck, just look at your multies,.. there real nice,...
Well that is if you count a multi as, using the word 'that' twice... (check sig)
...lmao nice punch
& success comes at a price, but kid's just getting chewed...
Cuz im serving this bitch, and he's just serving the food... (check his occupation)
...nice personal
But times up,.. face it.., kid try to comprehend,...
Cuz as he reads my closer,......
................................... he came to a sticky end...
...decent finisher
Overall: I've seen you do a lot bettrer but this is still dope. some good punches in there and lmao at the occupation line. good ish man.
LL -
look ima spit second cuz niggas feed like a lyrical leech
he's mad cuz he's not taken serious like a figure of speech
...ehh, kinda weak
but i aint even gotta prove that this nigga is weak
cuz he's a pussy so i guess you really are what you eat
...played, everybody has used that line
im like damn was 10 2 16 to much to handle
you wanna see a fucked up verse yours is a perfect example
...this was alright
played concepts like gun metal, you homos are endless
make claims of bare'n arms like the second admendment
...could have been nice if he had actually done it
you rip me?........................ naw you wont desect shit
i'll eat this cat like leavin B-n-J (Ben & Jerry) wit a fat depressed bitch
...wtf man?
now my conclusion this nigga's losin for dropin that whack shit
if you aint no freestyler y the fuck would you blind spit
...ehh ok punch
bitch you got here by mistake lookin for sounds of birds chirppin
i was ask'd to join this site you made it here by web surfin
...not bad, not bad
goes to shou that wit mistakes i'll be whitin'em out
cuz i've been through more trash then Oscar the Grouch
...average closer
Overall: You started off kinda slow man. You had some ok lines and there and one that was actually pretty good. You tried to connect on the baring arms line but it didn;'t really connect becaue he didnt't say it. Good effort though.
Vote/ Abstract
Reason: Verse had harder hitting punches and personals and was much more consistant.
Return the favor.....check the sig.
Na-Ledge Ben n Jerry is ice cream ass but thanx for the feedback anyway althoh most of my shit was common since uppin for votes^^^^^^^^^
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
this was a hard disition i think this battle was a tie becuase all yall came ot hard
lol...........................it cant be a tie, uppin 3
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this was a no contest i swear
abstract- a pretty good verse I liked the opener.. but some of the personals didnt hit as hard as legends.. the that line I didnt really see where you where trying to go with that..also the food line was pretty weak.. not that hard.. all in all a pretty good verse but didnt have enough punchlines to it to contend with legends
living legend- nice punchlines some had me laughing.. pussy line was nice and hard hititng.. web surfin line was dope also.. all in all I felt that the wordplay in your verse was just above abstracts
therefore my vote goes to living legend
hit this battle up with a vote yall
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