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[warchild]

I dont like to swear cunt bitch
My drug of choice skunks it
Ive been smoking three months straight i look chinese
I was gonna be a drug dealer but the police took my keys
My enemies shit their pants when cautions told
Im ripping a fetus from my girls womb cause abortions old
Plus im broke and cant afford to pay
Where i come from the laws not obeyed
So im shouting crazy words and on some criminal shit
Some say im dim but i never make a minimal hit
Im a mental motherfucker spiitting the best shit you ever heard
Most of the mcs liked to get fucked in the ass with a leather turd
Did that make sense what i just said?
I dont know dont care my styles alive yours is just dead
So i suggest that you appoint a mortician
I say fuck off to every woman but still the whores listen

Hook:
Okay okay okay place ya bets
How many of you motherfuckers think ive got tourettes?
It dont matter if its yes or no stop the press
Cause their aint none as proper
I love rap but i wanna sing in an operaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Im a devil worshiper so i have no faith
As im writing this song im in a spazmo state
Dribbling on myself and flicking my dick
My girl is dumber than me if she thinks ill be licking her clit
I only eat fish when its next to chips
But look ladies if your lucky i'll give your breasts a lick
I know many people like my style
But some dont cause im tight and vile
But come on the real fans know its wit
I see a flat chested girl and scream grow some tits
Im not deep in this song im here to piss you off
If your suprised then you must of missed the plot
Im just on some crazy wild and funny shit
I gave your girl a golden shower thats why your honeys pissed
You can hate me but you cant hate the rhymes
Yo i gotta go because its medication time

This was a rhyme i wrote about 18 months ago ive been going through my rhyme books and just seeing what i was writing about back then some of you wont like the topic but the flow is as tight as ever.

[Baron Mynd]

I thought your other piece was your last one ever?

[warchild]

It was gonna be my last one i was fucked off when i wrote it and i was just thinking about giving up but ive been thinking fuck it i know i got skills but im having a hard time getting beats.

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177769
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177809

['Young Cell']

this shit was ight to me i liked it maybe cause im me but you need to get this shit up

['Young Cell']

are you about to quit cause i see dude talking about...i thought this is going to be your last peace

[warchild]

Nah this aint my last post i wrote this a year and a half ago i know most people wont feel the topic cause it aint deep but the flow is on point but you probably dont recognise it.

[K9_THESHIT]

the flow is ok,but the piece itself to damn simple.quess thowsand of drops like this on OM.but ya said ya wrote it one year and a half ago,and i read some recent stuff off yours and ya improved much.i quess ya don't need me to say about the lacks of this particular drop cuz i think ya can see them for yourself.

if ya have the time drop a feed in K9&Metallica in my sig

[Jay Walker]

Lol. this was cool.

You said it yourself, it wasnt deep or anything, but it surely had me laughing in parts. A line that really stood out as being ignorant though was...

Im a mental motherfucker spiitting the best shit you ever heard
Most of the mcs liked to get fucked in the ass with a leather turd

...the first line was cool, but the second was ass. Overall though, I liked this sickening fucked up piece. It was cool. Keep it up.

[Spoken Deity]

i dont much like the chorus/hook
but everything is fucking great

good peace

[Addicted2Me]

It Was Ok...Didn't Really Get The Flow But That's Only Expected When It's Text Cuz Unless It's Obvious It's Hard To Pick Up. Topic Ain't My Style But It Sells. All In All Not Bad. Stay Up. Peace.

[-Broken Swordz-]

Overall Desent Piece, Flow was iight but kinda choppy in pieces, I liked the piece in a whole tho. Some lines had me like WTF??? But some Had me like DAMN nice!!! lol 6/10 Vocab was iight.. Overall Desent keep em coming

[Kalos Graphē]

lol that was not bad man i dunno i didnt feel it that much it was kinda weird

"Im not deep in this song im here to piss you off"
2 tell u the truth some of that song did piss me off cuz it was so stupid

good rhymes, kinda funny story behind it... not bad man but i think u can do better

[G-Money]

this piece was decent.... i like ur flow it was nice and it hella made me laugh... however i didnt like the hook/chorus, vocab was okay could of been better but for this peticular piece it was coo.....

Dribbling on myself and flicking my dick
My girl is dumber than me if she thinks ill be licking her clit


^^^ that line was killer i liked that .... good shit

[warchild]

Thanks for the feed this was just 2 verses i wrote way back just a stupid story rap the flow is on point if you know what flow means but ive got a lot better since i wrote this piece i used to just write crazy story rhymes but for the past year and a bit ive started to write more deeper shit.
Im uppin this once and thats it.