10 lines
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house rules
Urban Warrior
Myth
10 lines
due 1 hour from check in
house rules
checking in asshole...............
From: warrior town
How can I take u seriously ur a fucking clown
Id put u in a puddle u n ud still drown
Ya groping ya own cousin how sick is that
She once was a girl n now shes a matt
Just give up go away, resign
Dude ya lines are whack now ur gonna pay the fine
Dude ya fat ya ugly u got nuttin go for u
join the Nazi become a jew n let them blow the fuck outa you
this kids 22 n he still enjoys………………
playing with his daughter and his 2 little boys
sos my shit was whack gd luck mate
like picture trading........this battles just a " .gif "
and his names correct....his talents just a myth
i wouldnt " say your name to entertain my crew "
but its true, shit for you " the game is through "
kid your wack, shit.... wackness truly defined i mean
you even went to Wal-mart an asked to buy some "genes"
boy you thinnk your calm but il rip you til your pissed
21 gun salute when you were born, shame they missed
like indian fire signals...or like i just took a toke
heres the confession your careers just gone "up in smoke"
good luck
uppin for votes 1#...............
up 2#........wake up fuckers.........leave links il peep battles on alias
myth
flow-good
wordplay-weak
metas-poor
multis-poor
personals-weak
punches-ok
overall-not that good
urban warrior
flow-tight
wordplay-good
metas-poor
multis-poor
personals-good
punches-good
overall-good
vote-urban warrior
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i cant vote but i would give this rap to urban warrior for the sick rhymes and punches good battle
K.S.C
up 3...............some people who can actually poll their vote ?
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this battle was MEH.. one of those battles where i dude had nothing AT ALL and the other guy had all fyre...
myth u looked like u were having a wank at the same time trying to write a freestyle..
lmfao.. serious on the real mayne..
mc.. well u murked em.. 1st line won it buy its self.. had some good punches...
battle easyly won buy mc heartless......
wOrD uP pLaYaZ..
v/mc
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up4 mayne !..............come on !
myth
flow-good
wordplay-weak
metas-poor
multis-poor
personals-weak
punches-ok
overall-not that good
urban warrior
flow-tight
wordplay-good
metas-poor
multis-poor
personals-good
punches-good
overall-good
vote-urban warrior
Plese rtrn the favor by hittin up my battle wit YoungManny
myth
How can I take u seriously ur a fucking clown
Id put u in a puddle u n ud still drown
um no....weak
Ya groping ya own cousin how sick is that
She once was a girl n now shes a matt
WACK.....
Just give up go away, resign
Dude ya lines are whack now ur gonna pay the fine
nah
Dude ya fat ya ugly u got nuttin go for u
join the Nazi become a jew n let them blow the fuck outa you
um no
this kids 22 n he still enjoys………………
playing with his daughter and his 2 little boys
nah....wack
weak verse dawg need some serious work on them punches none of them landed..hell there really wernt any in the first place...us personals n multis in your verses...
heartless
like picture trading........this battles just a " .gif "
and his names correct....his talents just a myth
um ok could ave been better
wouldnt " say your name to entertain my crew "
but its true, shit for you " the game is through "
nice
kid your wack, shit.... wackness truly defined i mean
you even went to Wal-mart an asked to buy some "genes"
ight....decent
boy you thinnk your calm but il rip you til your pissed
21 gun salute when you were born, shame they missed
um ok...
like indian fire signals...or like i just took a toke
heres the confession your careers just gone "up in smoke"
um nice not a bad closer
nice verse some good punchs flow was ight n so wwas the structure...a good verse on the whole....
v/mc for harder punches....which actually landed.....