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    Dust it off

    I got the recoil of mouth always yellin down my throat
    The ridicule I face on about half the shit I wrote
    Saying Im a washed up rapper who needs fresh soap
    Caz this maybe my last album and record deal, nope
    I aint gonna sit back and get ran over and mope
    Im just gonna re-write my shit till it sounds dope
    And hope that a fan will like it and spread the word
    About the new cd be me that will destroy massacre
    Fuck all them gangstas talking bout they hard
    I'll make u hard to listen to when u rapping bout guns like a retard
    The age of real hip hop is coming back to every niggas yard
    And covering every cut up that g-unit scarred
    Rappers re-enter ur mind, and record the shit inside u find
    and ur lines u write will be defined as hip hops rewind
    Back into the past like u guys in 2 pac were alive at the same time
    Now unwind everything u got on ur record, promo, and mixes
    And come to the top of rap and get off the shitless
    Make u fierce as tyson and re-win the chicks kisses
    U go to a club and they cheer and ur hear no disses
    and 50-cent is about to be take down now, dont wanna miss this
    Now the real is back to destroying mics, yea life is vicious

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    I liked this verse you was just saying about what hip hop is right now just a bunch of mcs talking the same shit over and over again so i was feeling it.
    The structureand vocab were fine but you could work on your flow.

    Return the favour.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175486

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    uppin

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    I feel you man. Fuck anybody who dosen't like ur style or what ur rapping about. If you gangsta rap about gangsta shit. If you political rap about political shit. I think ur piece was saying fuck what everybody else is saying or doing and just do you and work hard at it. I think it was a well written piece man. Ok vocabulary but a good topic. nice drop.

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    i was liking the topic also...had key points, i think it could have been longer, cuz its like you grasped the attention of the reader, but then soon as i got interested it was over, like my fav. commercial...
    drop that hott shit, keep everyone amazed @ the universal language us lyricists speak about.................
    return da fav.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175764
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175743

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