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Thread: collab me-red-insane so dope we're discusting

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    B_LeAvE'
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    Exclamation collab me-red-insane so dope we're discusting

    So Dope We're Discusting


    b_leave
    i walk around the underground as a powerful thundersound..
    wearin the low down profound lyrical under crown...
    advanced listening wrestle with pressured exspessions...
    steppin in as a special and spitten fresher than freshman...
    obvious it over dosin coastin over oceans...
    with explosive potions flyer than your promotional posta's...
    walking around the planet, rockin the ground like granet...
    cockin my sound cannon, and stoppin at sound phantom...
    sicker than liquor and medicane burning and blisterin...
    leave ya light flicerin quicker than strobes you tripp'n in...
    simple derange brain exchange pain for game...
    re-arrange ya frame in different patterns with slange..
    cause im bigger, badder and better...
    than all your golden chedder...
    when spreadin win like medicine men..
    with ancient tribal letterin...


    Chorus: (2x)
    so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
    so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin



    red
    I'm rhyming, my adrenaline is rising
    Losing over 20 battles is just verbally surprising
    Especially with the verbal tactics you got at yo hand
    Intellectual Murder is the position where I still stand
    Defeating yo ass-quick, won't let yo ass last-quick
    Rhymes are intellect, even though i have fast-spits
    Getting whip-lash, getting quick-cash al-though
    while i dismantle all ya'll verbally, insane will terminate all-hoes
    Permanently, my verse has you fucked up mentally
    Senselessly, destroy wack-cees so bad they wouldn't tell-me
    Trust me, you can't handle-it, Pretty soon I'll dismantle-it
    Couldn't have "fly rhymes" if you wrote them on a mantle-hit
    Hit the floor hard, CRASH BANG KABOOM!
    That had to hurt, with yo rhymes shattered all over the room
    Got creative lyrics, but even if you had 20/20 vision
    you'd be losing this battle and still wouldn't be able to see-it
    Panic, massive drama to ya mama cuz she suffered from lyrical trauma
    I gots an evil type Karma, ended ya life, now youz a gonna
    Hot like Hell's sauna, wrong up-bringing made me last longah
    As rap relates to me, I commit verbal rapes unto wack-cees
    Like asthma to ya bronchiual tubes
    My rhymes is crazy, no doubt ya gon lose
    'Tween me and death who ya wanna choose?


    Chorus: (2x)
    so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
    so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin



    insane
    Aiight, check it…organization is key, so I gotta grab the check list
    I gotta clean up this mess ‘cuz I made sure this kat was left breathless
    Pick up the flesh bits before Feds inspect the specimens and I get arrested
    But next it’s…important to report nothing to any human connections
    What’s left of this gruesome corpse, direct the scalpel and dissect it
    No misperception…my sickness in the head may cause audiences indigestion
    Back to the topic of question…what happens to this body and possibly the next one
    So I need to ship the pieces to third-world species to grease the meat and eat it
    Believe it…I’ma even make a profit…this scheme is steaming with hotness
    Now, my mind is streaming with projects as my illness develops
    Next setup, I’m gonna ship sick body parts to family members drenched in ketchup
    Don’t come to me wit pressed luck…you might be the next up to this dopeness!


    Chorus: (2x)
    so nice that were nasty, so bangin were bustin
    so sweet that were sick, so dope were discustin

  2. #2
    B_LeAvE'
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    damn boy's we fuckin killed it ya'll might as well move us to the hall of fame

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    Vomit lyrically_insane's Avatar
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    lol.....damn homie....that wsa NOT my best right there!...i shoulda madwe mine better yo...well anyways UPPING!
    VERBAL INTERCOURSE

  4. #4
    B_LeAvE'
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    what you think of my verse pimp

  5. #5
    young ryda
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    dat was pretty nice my vte is def it deserves studio tiem but not quite a million dollar song yet lol

    -ryda

  6. #6
    B_LeAvE'
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    thankz pimp keep the feed back comin rb this is my first collab on here

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    shit was tight yall.. likin the spits from my crew mainly nah b leave ya shit was allgood 2.. keep em coming yo

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    Will Merk You
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    B leave's verse was the best, as far as flow, the flow was in fact disgusting, maybe coulda had more content, but the flow was nice enough to make me not care, after reading that verse, red's was a real let down, it went from awsome flow to like.. he tried to keep up with it i just didnt see it happen, still not a bad verse, just shouldnt have been after B's.. and insane had a good verse too.. probly had the most sensinble content.. each had their own highlights.. a close behind 2nd, nice collab..

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172961
    Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.

  10. #10
    brilliantholdone
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    come and vote for da new battle
    brilliant vs skateboard

    u choose whos da best ight holla
    aint losin
    easyyy

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    hello its that site killa
    comin'for
    you

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    ill battle anyone

  14. #14
    B_LeAvE'
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    dawg why the fuck you freepostin in my thread get the fuck out

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    it was a great read even the few flaws in it where made up for by other factors overll i definetly woul like to see another collab
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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