Be Dope To Yourself

[Ndustrial Minded]

I noticed on RB that you ain't dope unless someone says you are
so that's what this is based on

Judging is a factor that leads to people bringin themselves down
but if they think they're dope...fuck it they should give emself a crown
Shit people be puttin themselves down after bein put down by others
most of them are shit themselves...some of them are close brothers

Crew's also judge by the post count...or number of wins
as soon as they see a noobs its no...a vet on their faces grows grins
A lot of hate has grown on RB too...pointless really
its all just a bunch of worthless bullshit...you feel me?

People thinken they're the king of hip hop...the king of the site
fuck them...be true to yourself...elevate and fill them with fright
Make them know your there an you'll beat them sooner or later
shut them the fuck up...an put to end another voice of a hater

Laugh in their face an kick them while they're down...revenge is sweet
if you blink once too many times it can hit you like a bullet from mass heat
Don't get cocky or your gettin yourself in a bad position
line yourself up for a nigga a step under you on a mission

But don't get shook...your dope...to yourself an thats all you need
fuck everyone else...smoke some weed an laugh at all their greed

No hate on anyone
i tried to make it kinda funny but i don't think it worked
i'll get my links later

[Nation]

yo that was ill, really liked the topic u chose no lack in content i must say, good drop man, good topic... keep dropin

[Civilized Gangsta]

Pretty good job here man..your flow and structure was good...your topic was good..i think you worded most of your linez good...overall not bad..your imagery was pretty strong..your vocab seemed pretty good also..overall good job

[DrFunkMD]

That drop was hella tight nigga. Hella fella mogella!
I like the rhyming and flow. I also understand what your saying.
Good message, haha.
Anyhoo, keep it up!

[SimonSays]

I can see you kind of felt angry, maybe not being recognized for your talents. Well your emotion was here, and that is always a key aspect in open mics, to flow with your emotion.

I dont' know but I seem to be getting this vibe, that you seem to be sensing restlessness and cockiness in other heads.

Again the structure could use some sorting out, than that would work out your flow.

Lyrics well, were kind of weak, but I dont' think this was meant to be a lyrical piece, so it's all good.

Good job fam, keep it up, and always leave feedback.

[Cee Flow]

ya'll cats are weak, I spit mad bars that are sick and this dude writes some weak indirect diss at me and you dickriders comment a million times on his shit...this site ain't about mc skill it's some clicky bullshit, kids writin me private messages sayin I'm the best but no posting on my shit...what is this shit all about analyzin this kid's meaningless raps like a high school english paper and leaving my damn near 100 bars unmentioned/commented on it just pisses me off it's like heads are afraid to comment or somethin, I can just stick to my notebook if you cats don't appreciate a little dropped knowledge, but most of ya'll are wack anyway...
ONE

[Ndustrial Minded]

^ stay the fuck outta my thread herb...i couldn't give less of a fuck what you think

I can see you kind of felt angry, maybe not being recognized for your talents. Well your emotion was here, and that is always a key aspect in open mics, to flow with your emotion.

word I am gettin pissed as i look around RB an seein people bein judged by other people as "wack" or "dope"
as for my talents not bein recognized...that doesn't effect me too much
but yeah it gets to me here and there..an it does piss me off

[Nation]

ha what a bitch, talkin shit about ndust drop, no ones dickriding bitch, called commenting on a good drop, dont come in this thread and cry like a bitch cuz no one comments ur shit.

[CrazyCarl]

You had some good ideas for this. Some words could have been substituted for(themselves), so work on word choice. You had alright flow for these separated bars. They aren't too unrelated that they could not be put together, but they're a little different concept.
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[mc heartless]

great topic........i was actually thinkin along these lines myself but you beat me to it !! DAMN !!...........but you did it justice man........nice drop.....feeling was there........imagery was good.......wording was a lil off at times.........but the rest was overall nice..........keep it up