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    Killing 'em Foes

    This is just a Lil drop i felt like doing...you know one of them topiks you jst be like"oh im a write about that"...lol...well its short...if yall like it tell me and ill make it longer!



    Killing ‘em Foes

    I grasp a craft like shaft to blast through magnetic force-fields
    Pinpoint an enemy-squeal, butchering opponent till scalped-or-peeled
    having niggas tracked-n-killed, from lifeless devices
    stimulated pipe-hits got us burning near the isis of our eye-lids
    dare and try to collide-kid, you'll get a "Ruff Ride" till you die-bitch
    praised to spit-bliss on mind-tricks,catching these ‘dicks’ ejaculating to fine-chicks
    influenced from crime-flicks, got me releasing artillery to blind-clicks
    two at a time insane will kill enemies in form of a tribe quick
    got me contaminated in war sick, sweating till embedded of my misery
    lethal-weaponry slowly deplee's from dis-belief in loss of my memory
    we enhanced complicated trajectories until concealed with a blessed weapon-siege
    niggas stay "soft" like after "irrection-flee's", to be left incarcerated deceased from me


    hook

    we leave foes dispursed-n-cursed
    in a herst-tah-burst ya thirst
    Kuz the worst will come-first
    when lyrically challenging my verse




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    ss verse "the getaway"

    Still Da Same

    ......wont lemme COPY and PASTE tha links............wonda why?
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    yo cmon ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    UPPING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    im still here and an asshole by WORD~PERFECT
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    thnah im just fucking!

    dammn homie it seems like our SHIT always getting sept on!...well i think this drop was tight it had tight multies,flow,structure,aight punches,overall i give this 8.5/10
    oyu should extend the lenght

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    A yo Im new on dis site man but ya post got nice flow cuz. Good muties and punches. Word Play wuz aiight to. I givez it a 9/10. Holla @ya east side playa.

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    what da fuck^^^...dont do that shit Red_...damn!

    well anyways here go my links

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    yo cmon people!!!!!!!!....dont sleep on this

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    Yo man, that fuckin Chorus was hot and i love the multi's in this shit which im a big fan in flows,....But ya gotta work on ya structures and formatation, this shit was pretty good! stay up

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