hellsent vs GeWyMaN23

[hellsent]

1 you drop first
2 due midnite
3 12 lines max

[Judge Judy]

u think hellsent would have a freakin badside, but this nigga softer than fuckin bleach known as Tide, he claims to have skillz but that not true, well see who merked who wen the results comes through, im a 13 year old wonder boy, a spazmatic attacker with a sex toy, ill slap u wit the dildo and rub it in ur face, stop rappin on RB man, u a freakin disgrace, dont get mad cuz im killin u in this battle like oj on his wife, or how quick a psycho path gets in thrown jail for life, my name should be heavensent cuz a angel guides me, youll know that once you get to read and see, it mite be gifted talent but who would know? mayb its straigth illusion the way i flow, mayb im gettin a little out of hand, but who cares, while you weep put ur head in the sand

[hellsent]

another 13 yr old victim fallin to the hands of hellsent when yall mothafuckers gonna learn i got connections like sprint to get yo
head split/ ya fukan throat slit /
i dont rap about mamas only the punk ass bitch im battlin this aint a game muthafuka we aint wrestlin/ ashes to ashes dust to dust i represent the hellsent clik and u dont wanna fuk with us/guns i bust ya bitches clit i touch dont front lil 1 actin like u hard nigga ill pull ya fukin card/you must be a retard steepin to me cuz when i got beeef muthafuka i creep put ya rookie ass to sleep 6 feet deep/nigga i make ya feel my heat my wrath when i murder that ass haha/nigga step outta line again i put ya ass in a fukin coffin end ya career on rb.com/

[hellsent]

shit i ran outtta words but good battle b

[Judge Judy]

yea nice battlin you, good job

[hellsent]

votes votes votes votes votes votes b votes

[Judge Judy]

cmon guys vote !!!!!!!!!!!

[Genetic Carnage]

Both raps were wack. They both lacked structure and flow and they were both uneven in bars. I have to say the 13 year old boy put more work into his since he had a bigger vocab in his rhymes. Hellsent seemed like he was just playing a rhyme and took him a little less serious then he should have just because of his age.

V. /Gewyman

[ThE ReAlEsT OnE]

Hell..

another 13 yr old victim fallin to the hands of hellsent when yall mothafuckers gonna learn i got connections like sprint to get yo
head split/ ya fukan throat slit /
i dont rap about mamas only the punk ass bitch im battlin this aint a game muthafuka we aint wrestlin/ ashes to ashes dust to dust i represent the hellsent clik and u dont wanna fuk with us/guns i bust ya bitches clit i touch dont front lil 1 actin like u hard nigga ill pull ya fukin card/you must be a retard steepin to me cuz when i got beeef muthafuka i creep put ya rookie ass to sleep 6 feet deep/nigga i make ya feel my heat my wrath when i murder that ass haha/nigga step outta line again i put ya ass in a fukin coffin end ya career on rb.com/
4/10

Gewy..

u think hellsent would have a freakin badside, but this nigga softer than fuckin bleach known as Tide, he claims to have skillz but that not true, well see who merked who wen the results comes through, im a 13 year old wonder boy, a spazmatic attacker with a sex toy, ill slap u wit the dildo and rub it in ur face, stop rappin on RB man, u a freakin disgrace, dont get mad cuz im killin u in this battle like oj on his wife, or how quick a psycho path gets in thrown jail for life, my name should be heavensent cuz a angel guides me, youll know that once you get to read and see, it mite be gifted talent but who would know? mayb its straigth illusion the way i flow, mayb im gettin a little out of hand, but who cares, while you weep put ur head in the sand

7/10

Vocab-Gewy
Wordplay-Gewy
flow-Gewy
Punches-Gewy

V/Gewy..came harder wit the punches an had more of a consistent flow..

Hell sent u came weak on this 1...keep elevatin..

vote on my battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170395

[jerz killer]

Hellsent-Man this was a shitty battle.NOne of your lines made a punch or even a fist.Make some multies when u battle.Work on your structure so ur lines flow correctly and sounds right.This is a battle not a freestyle so make some punches and mutaphors.Nuf said.U lost.

vs.

Gewyman23-these lines were crap u really need to elevate.None of your punches really hit Hellsent.u need to work on your structure,flow,and multies.Go personal and really talk about his name and where he is from.U really need to elevate.But for this battle your safe cause hellsent sucked to but was below u.This goes to..................

........v/Gewyman23