10 lines
no crew/hate/dickride votes
no recycling/biting/feeding
due anytime today
10 lines
no crew/hate/dickride votes
no recycling/biting/feeding
due anytime today
check yo.....
checking in u spit first
it will be a blind spit due anytime today... so it doesnt matter who goes first
cuz i gotta drop an OM piece on my other name... i'll post my verse soon though
this fucker looks like he's gonna no-show.. what a loser
from the beggining he didn't deserve to become a regular user
pathetic, from "Da HoOD" blah blah like i aint hear THAT before
i guess he's in some sort of struggle...
...but that struggle is to spell his name correctly, dumb whore
i own little kids, and this bitch is definetly one of them
from the way he spells, it's a sign he has no friends
he's 0-2, so now he's gonna no-show, what a bitch
he couldn't win if he took a class on concept flips
his verses are ass, he's weak and completely wack
look for dope in his verse..
...but fakeness is the only thing he DON'T lack
blah whatever he'll probably no-show anyway
-who The Fuck Is This Nigga Vc
-battle Me And Then U Fall Like The Rest
-nigga Think He Can Rap And He Think He A "g"
-my Slugs Will Get Inside Of U Like Hiv
-i Pull Out Them Mags And Shoot U And Ur Crew
-how Did A Vegetarian Have More Beef Than U
-u Shouldn't Battle Me U Will Get Destroyed
-ur Punchlines Dont Work On Me Its Like They Umemployed
-i Dont Wanna Kill This Nigga But I Gotta
-the Closest Thing This Nigga Got To Beef Was A Cow Pinata
-imma Slash Ur Rap Dreams Just Like Freddy
-i'm Like Taken A Test With No Pen Nigga U Aint Ready
-if Beaten Me In A Battle Was Ur Goal Then U Just Failed
-my Flow Is Disgusting Like Bitches With Dirty Finger Nails
-i Am Done With This Nigga He Aint Shit
-i Am Hot On 16 Like Some R.kelly Piss
lmao
up #1 vote up and i'll hit you back once i get 100 posts
up 2 c'mon and vote fools
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
up 3 bitches
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
WOW keyer verse a realy wack verse lmao V.C took this easyly he had structure which the other dude didnt he had punches which the other dude didnt if he did they were wack as fuck...he had an over all better verse im tired of breaking this down...go read some LLL and feebles tutorials theyll definatly help
v. VC
I will slay thee
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make you look STUPID
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up 4!!!!
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
open:vc
closer:ef
structure:both
flow:ef
punches:both
v/ef cause he didnt talk about the other guy noshowin even though he did
and ef try workin on multis
vc work on not repeting yourself
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^an example of a true herb
up 5
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
Both were WACK. Damn, each verse lacked structure and flow and the rhymes you posted that you thought were funny just made you look idiotic. Your lines were uneven and your vocabulary was novice. It’s hard to rate something as weak as this but all in all it comes down to who’s lines were more even and that would be V.C.’s.
V. /V.C.
Even though you won you’re still garbage…keep droppin and elevate, seriously…
V.C. -
this fucker looks like he's gonna no-show.. what a loser
from the beggining he didn't deserve to become a regular user
ok opener
pathetic, from "Da HoOD" blah blah like i aint hear THAT before
i guess he's in some sort of struggle...
...but that struggle is to spell his name correctly, dumb whore
decent
i own little kids, and this bitch is definetly one of them
from the way he spells, it's a sign he has no friends
meh not really feelin it
he's 0-2, so now he's gonna no-show, what a bitch
he couldn't win if he took a class on concept flips
ok
his verses are ass, he's weak and completely wack
look for dope in his verse..
...but fakeness is the only thing he DON'T lack
decent closer
overal a pretty decent verse. a couple of decent punches and a few ok ones.
Eval Fury -
-who The Fuck Is This Nigga Vc
-battle Me And Then U Fall Like The Rest
weak opener. 1st line was meh and 2nd was self glory.
-nigga Think He Can Rap And He Think He A "g"
-my Slugs Will Get Inside Of U Like Hiv
weak. 1st line was meh and 2nd was wack ... again
-i Pull Out Them Mags And Shoot U And Ur Crew
-how Did A Vegetarian Have More Beef Than U
meh not feelin it
-u Shouldn't Battle Me U Will Get Destroyed
-ur Punchlines Dont Work On Me Its Like They Umemployed
nah not feelin it
-i Dont Wanna Kill This Nigga But I Gotta
-the Closest Thing This Nigga Got To Beef Was A Cow Pinata
nope weak ... again
-imma Slash Ur Rap Dreams Just Like Freddy
-i'm Like Taken A Test With No Pen Nigga U Aint Ready
-if Beaten Me In A Battle Was Ur Goal Then U Just Failed
-my Flow Is Disgusting Like Bitches With Dirty Finger Nails
weak
-i Am Done With This Nigga He Aint Shit
-i Am Hot On 16 Like Some R.kelly Piss
wack closer
Your verse hardly dissed if, it t all. It was more aimed at you than at him
Vote - V.C.
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