freestyle

[theGirl]

its the Girl and i'm hot the shit dont stop til i pop me
one of them things got to pop the top on one of them things
so i'm a keep rockin the spots i mean hoes jockin and watchin me
watchin my team watch how i lean, please i aint rhymin for bling
i'm rhymin for cream u might as well freeze my rhymes better than u
lil boo one pill blue one mil two like i need those my weed dro when i
peeps low heat these flows got these fiends all in speed mode my
speed slow man i need doe so i'm a spit and put the grippers on em
if they out of pocket pour bacardi on em and burn em up, turn me up
hard shit from a bitch this the hardest shit a bitch ever spit this hard
shit put a nigga on brick illest chick spit this shit til i'm rich man
i spit this shit til i'm rich i'll kill a bitch in the booth i'm the truth

[Sensation]

I like the short lines, and quick rhymes. Easy to read and imagry is there. Gangsta...hahahaha.

[Jared Janes]

flow was nice, i agree with sensation on this. something different with ur short lines, i thought it was slick. peace

[sILLable]

tight piece, good imagery,good rhyme scheme, it had structure, it was simple, u need better vocab,and u rhymed tha same words together too many times, other than that this piece had mad potential, keep elevatin and droppin tha hottness boo.~1~

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Caesar Augustus]

i though it was decent it flowed together well esspeacially for a freestyle

[JustInsane]

hey u from c-town cool me too. the rhyming was nice but u should try to improve ur vocab. try a deeper subject, and just keep on with it peace

[theGirl]

thanks for the critics guys, keep it comin. what up Just.