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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    Soon to be audio " Make Way " ( over Royce' Boom beat )

    Believe DrztiC is plain ill
    Watch the pain spill not from the metal
    But from my brain chills to ur veins
    Thrill real n lames
    Willing to train, entertain
    Center stage the stage’s center
    When I enter game
    No mentor name
    The momentums renegade
    Generate when I spray
    Elevate on the way
    Stay straight on the lane
    The lane I rail, never fail
    Just a better male...you frail
    Better mail what u got to say
    Fuck jail baby not today
    I’m out just to play
    Just to sale, bust you snail
    Cuss u pale little demon
    U dreamin’ when u think you steamin’
    ZtiC feen n I say what I mean n
    German Dream? what r we then
    DC, RX HNR team man


    Just the Best on the court
    Berlin’s Best with the warp...
    Speed blessed with a mob...
    Deep sleep while we fishin’ for stars
    Dishin’ more barz than the pen
    Earn every cent to make sense
    Learn to prevent each attempt
    They pretend to be friends
    Put yo head in a wrench
    Reach for them
    Teach em then that I’m still broke
    Say What???
    Yea u hear my flow
    But It’s real though...I’m still broke
    That’s not how i feel though
    My skillz make me filthy fuckin’ rich
    Fuck every silly buggin’ bitch
    You really nuttin trick
    Nuttin slick...
    seein’ you I won’t be nuttin
    gottin it...


    I do this just to prove it
    White guys r tight n Germans ain’t stupid
    Fuck all that u spit...I’m too thick
    You too slim wimp, a toothpick
    Ask who’s it....the new kid
    You chose RIP let’s do it
    Watch me pump hot fluid
    To ruin all that u doin
    I’m screwin’ all that be movin’
    No loosin’ I’m rulin’ the enlightend
    Ignitin’ my man.....Nady’s pipe
    With my rhymin’ light
    It be shinin’ bright like a diamond knife
    Call it crime or life
    when I claim my spot
    Cut a piece I deserve...it ain’t a lot
    I’ll remain up top
    once I arrive
    once I got wife n kidz
    I want to be able
    to provide a few bikes n shit
    Hold a golden mic n spit
    each night to get
    More respect....more of that
    One can not buy
    I can not lie...I will not stop to try
    To achieve my goal....not today, not tomorrow NO just NO


    No one can stop me from rappin’
    It won’t happen
    No known captain
    came to capture Rome...
    action Syndrome,
    fracture ya dome
    With hard beats...don’t start me
    can’t be hold down,
    not by a whole town
    Plz roll out
    u ain’t serious with it
    Gone be a serious shitting
    Gone turn from
    curious to delirious
    Ripping the furious, whipping
    Shots from the hip, no kidding
    Tilting ya crip you live in
    Just give in


    I’m getting’ rich
    Original like the sphinx
    Ma mouth it blings
    Records spin,
    my sound It swings
    My louds conquer every inch
    U can flinch, u won’t miss it
    It’s DC world u don’t visit, u live it
    Get it? I’m ya pivit foot when u ball
    The hands on ya whore
    Ya pants and ya drawers
    Ya chances n shores
    I stand for it all
    Rockin’ dancefloors n halls
    I brawl wit these chanceless encore
    Drop my standards n pants to the floor
    In my hands the four four
    Knockin’, now u don’t have to ask in
    I’m fuckin’ blastin’
    U motherfuckers askin’ for a chance to live
    The only chance u got
    Is if I forgot my clips at a friends lil’ bitch…



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166691
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166459
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    This was nice.....damn everyone is sleepin on it......lines were a lil short but other than that looked good

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    thx dog I felt like this the right flow for it....them short lines fit the beat pretty good...uppin pz
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    i liked this man..the overall topic was good..you worded your lines well...i like your structure..i normally dont..but you made it sound well with your content..your imagery wuz strong...i think you handled your content well in this man..keep up this structure though it does work for you...your vocab wasnt bad...overall descent job

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    This was a tight piece man. This shit flowed really well, the structure only looked bad but when u spit it out it all comes together nicely. You had some nice multi's in there, and wat i like about it is that you didnt just rhyme the last word of each line, u were also rhymin the words that were leading up to it, which is good. I'll be sure to listen to this on audio. Overall a good job. Keep up the good work.pz.

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    tight drop homie i kant wait for the audio!!!overall i give it 8.5/10

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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    thx for the luv y'all...be sure to check the audio...hope it'll turn out aight...
    any more comments?
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    up...stop sleepin on this..pz
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...86#post2032086

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    here's the link to the audio....check that...pz
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