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    Busten Headz=noncentz Aka Word P Featurning Dalc

    dalc:
    ejaculate into the anal cavity of my enimies;
    lacerated extrimities,
    divinity coagulated in intervals of infinity,
    the mosaics of the cuts adorning your anantomy intricately,
    inlaid and portrayed alongside the murderous instincts displayed,
    conveyed in the extensions of false redemption,
    convulse whilst comprehesion is apprehended,
    perdition revealed and complemented by sadistic characetristics,
    blood running through severed veins;pessimistic existence,
    fundamentalistic statistics of the tole of death are infernal,
    eternal souls put to rest,neural networks impaled by the quill,
    my programming is to kill exhaled angelic saviors and seal,
    the path that hath been exalted before the eyes of rath,
    demise,aftermath,decay,flies,displays of savage lingusitcs and math,
    imperialistic in nature;
    The perverse verses of curse that disperse and converse with you,
    mental fabric torn as scorn adorns a deformed look consuming morn,
    the fucking bullshit only motivates and creates hate,
    generates debates that incenerate contemplated fate,
    dont argue with the complexity or my destiny will violate and break,
    dillipidated mental state is summoned at my calling of allegory,
    my exploratory oratory is a phonistery of observatory,
    purgatory emerges in a story made to purge the depictions of logic,
    contradicitons are chronic,your metaphors are simply extinct,
    pay attention to the transcended comprehension in my style and think,
    octarine in my iris,a simple glance dances amongst your statled look,
    a literary bitch;dont play by the book,never have,so when i bust watch,
    you simply mistook saying i babble nonscense,just interpret,
    i emit with wit knowledgeable bars more astrological then star systems,
    and this isnt dissin,
    just and informative composisiton of syllabel sound repitition.



    Noncentz the last of his class.... like I had detention/.
    My intensions/are to bust your shit...a black eye
    Fallowed by a punch line is just an extension.
    For a grip now you had it to easy...these heavens/
    Call that flowing? Man I could spit better dehydrated
    And wheezing while dry heaving. You aint on top...
    You’d be lucky to break even. If not flop.... half of you
    Is either biting or teething.
    Coming at me like you rap with a purpose
    When your styles useless/you rap bitches...
    If I knocked you up you'd be leaven with bruises.
    Say what you want to none of you can compare me/
    And couldn’t drop a single if you were getting married.
    I been where your at that’s fact... and even through
    Trials I never settled/you fagots think this a game play
    On you want you'll never reach my level.
    I been warned you im a "cocky fuck" like having
    12 inches penetrate/face it you fake/
    Or turn your back on your fate...defy destiny...
    I’ll sue you for sampling trying to be my remake.
    Spitting a shot and busting one is the same when
    It comes bucking sleepers/the only difference is I
    Could drown the rounds from your 9 millimeters
    In 9 milliliters.
    So how bad do you want it im like 9 yr old pussy
    Im that tight/on mics/but your rhymes are beginning week...
    Like Saturday midnight.
    Dissing me is a gamble but if thin you can hit lotto then bet...
    A hard knocks vet/you couldn’t get the best of me on a box set.
    Im varicose vein and a narcissist/while you couldn’t spit flames
    If you gave brains to an arsonist so why do you persist?
    Most of you believing a lie... thinking you fly...only if you high
    That’s why I don’t just rip weak emcees I rip whoever
    Influenced them to try.
    You may have an (A) flow but that aint its grade bro
    You aint a G and wouldn’t move a UNIT pushing bricks of YAYO
    (But im ill cousin) if you say so.... you a hole.
    Don’t make me start busting you'll be leaving with a concussion.
    I aint broke or from the soviet union but I start bum Russian...
    Any of you lame fucks acting hard when you don’t even sound
    Right when u cussing.
    Me and DALC that’s right two emcees with appetites
    Staying hungry beefing on mic instigating fistfights.
    Spitting with intensity ill with delivery
    Retire...? I would pass the torch to the statue of liberty.
    Last edited by noncentz; January 26th, 2005 at 10:50 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    (This is Jekyll - DALC will understand)

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    ^actually i dont get it.

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    uppin this damn
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    great a reply without replying
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    DALC - im glad...this is not bad...it's good...some rough spots with your meter, a mispelling or two...excellent dicton...excellent syntax...very good imagery...exceptional metaphor....work on your meter....work on your overall presentation....work on spacing, etc...do the fine tuning....

    noncentz..eh...your verse wasn't up to the par of the first...you had a lot of mispellings, and your grammer was jacked....your diction was jacked...your syntax blah..presentation, blah...might sound nice out loud...but im critiquing purely from a literary standpoint...keep writing though..you have potential
    Bittersweet

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    what about its content the punches and metaphors?
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Quote Originally Posted by DALC
    ejaculate into the anal cavity of my enimies
    That is all I read and then I decided I liked when I couldn't understand you.
    can I kick it?

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpokenOragami
    That is all I read and then I decided I liked when I couldn't understand you.
    NOT TO OFFEND BUT CAN I GET SOME REPLIES THAT MAKE SENCE?
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    This was nice.......good vocab, Flow, well everything looked pretty good.....a few flaws but nothing major good job WP

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    Thanks Twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    eh the punches were alright..the metaphors were...simple, and ok....im sorry to be so critical, but i feel it will benefit the writer better, because that's how it would be recieved by a producer or somebody...i don't want to give a mindless shit was hot...or it was aiight....that doesn't help a writer grow....
    Bittersweet

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sublime D
    eh the punches were alright..the metaphors were...simple, and ok....im sorry to be so critical, but i feel it will benefit the writer better, because that's how it would be recieved by a producer or somebody...i don't want to give a mindless shit was hot...or it was aiight....that doesn't help a writer grow....
    I DONT SEE HOPW YOU THINK MY PUNCHES ARE SIMPLE BUT I LIKE THIS CAUSE YOUR REPLY FEEDS ME WHAT I NEED TO DO MORE
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    shit was definitly poppin.. I think i remeber your name from RM..

    both verses were str8, nice length and good schemes... shit was hot.. from both mc's..

    good looks

    $ DOT FAT





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