Possessed by Evil

[Omniscient]

I contemplate my ideas and precipitate my plans
Possessed by the devil but still rapped in God’s hands
Remorse the evil deeds I did and try to change
But badness to evilness was my mentality range
Corrupted by the devil my soul is eternally cursed
I pray to him every night after I finish wit God first
Piece by piece my life is falling apart horrendously
In my dreams I talk to Hannibal and J.F Kennedy
My heart turns black every time I take in pain
If your hearts good don’t expect me to know your name
Some people call me the devils right-hand man
Because killing people is my life’s #1 demand
A black cloud’s over my head and its filled wit rage
Its hungry to bust out like a lion locked in a cage
First the villain of society now I got converted to a rebel
Ready to pop out of the flames and pose as the devil
Cherished by the demons I stay hidden in the dark
Like vampires waiting for a victim to put on a mark
Killers and murderers can’t even be compared to me
I’m the evolved version of crime and evil sorcery


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...60#post2005760
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[lyrically_insane]

pretty tight drop dude....i like the topic and your "dark" way of rappin........overall i give it 8/10....keep droppin bro!

[m.v.p.]

what up wit ya i liked that junt i was really feeling it cuz i can relate to it
keep spitin

[Omniscient]

thanks 4 the feed homies_uppin 4 more

[Omniscient]

Uppin

[GhettoFabolous]

Aye wuzz up dogg.

This be a nice drop man, i feelin it. Like how u metaphorically compared dark evils to youself, was dope. I got into it bout 2 bars before u finished which be a shame, but it sitll a tyte lil drop man. Keep these comin.

Hit up da link in my sig plz my nigga, its "The Team Anthem".

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[Da Professor]

ok all i am gonna say is keep droppin' shit like this it's good man!!! Keep It Up!!!

[TheFatSkinny]

shit flows pretty solid on here...........
lyrics are nice one here.. had a few quotable lines..... I think u could have found better ways to say " corrupted or possesed by the devil, it kinda seems repetative

[Omniscient]

thanks 4 the feed homies appreciate it_uppin

[STAT$]

You this was real nice.......imagery, vocab, flow, structure.......everything looked good.......good job, stay up

[Omniscient]

thanks man appreciate it_uppin

[Omniscient]

Uppin

[Novacain]

This was nice, i liked the first few bars a lot
Keep droppin shit like this man,

But one thing, try using sum punctuality, it heps the piece and doesn't make it seem like its all blocked in

But thats the structure, not the words, this was a nice pice, well done

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167239
hit mine up to for me? thanks