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  1. #1
    The Drama Club
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    Proven

    chorus:
    it aint enough for you that i say i love you
    or i come around n infront of my boys i say boo
    you constantly remind me of my last
    buttill proven guilty youll be my life long task


    verse1:
    How could I be accused of bein not in love
    when I contantly try n tell you that you're above
    all those other girls that i try n eye spy
    but no matter how i say i love you i get the goodbye
    or hung u on in my face,when im the one who got the place
    but i never trip all i say is i love you and go
    till the next day i stay out late while you call me a no-show
    to your friends sayin how i was out wi some chick
    toungin her snatch and lettin her tickle my dick
    but you literally take things to an extreme of lies
    when im out night i go to my second home and try
    to make your content with your life but you dont know
    what i have to go through to make sure ur comfor-table

    chorus:




    verse2:
    Now its a matter of my commitment and cash
    when day n night i take care of ur silly ass
    accusin me of cheatin,datin other girls n suff
    when i could just as eaily through up the guy Muff
    in ur face and see what hes become for you
    but you deny it by sayin hes never stopped through
    but the neighbors call me up sayin a Black Chevys pulled up
    with no friends hes a tall black male with two guns tucked
    wtf is he plannin to shoot me,when i literally saved his street
    came thru tearin up a nigga who was thoro Edmonds ass beat
    blood along my shoes and all you can do is invite him in
    hell ive gone dry two weeks n six days wtf whens my stick in
    neva thats why i should close hose doors and make you suffer
    but its been proven Muff is a punk and your makin me tougher
    by sayin that hes a temporary feeling the emotions are short
    hell lets see how short theyre when i buts a block in his port


    chorus:


    verse3crystals message)
    Boo you cal me up 24/7 tellin me ur ready
    but i cant leave cuzz my fam aint steady
    you could ocme n visit we can go somewhere discrete
    let me hit it on the bedor outside on the concrete
    makin it hot and untameble the sun is against your back
    makin it better as i make you cum like you were runnin track
    heavy breathin long strokes make it tremble make u flinch
    body twitches dick still itches to be sucked so get it wet
    back n forth girl you make a nigga feel on top of the world
    make it fun make it active pull ur head back n twirl
    but never loose your place ur my girl always by my side
    so i ove you day n night thru black n white yoll always ride
    thats hwy i choose you to be my b.a.b.y until we die
    i wont be why you cry at night and for your love i wont have to try

    chorus:
    Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
    90% How You React To It.

  2. #2
    "fi-del"
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    this is ok, good flow. nice emotion and good rhyme's. there are a few bars I wasnt feeling. apart from them good drop.

  3. #3
    REAL
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    eh this was pretty basic and simple.................flow was sorta force and lines were stretched but the emotion in this was good...........sounds like you made it pretty quik.......it also sounded like somthin you just wanted to get off your chest.....stay up Joka.......

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...1&page=1&pp=15
    Well joka your in the crew so this doesnt really apply to you but every one else hit up this link for the Blade Oracles anthem

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    The Drama Club
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    ^^ight thanx fa tha feedback...yea that anthem was good...eh it was quick n somethin for me to get off my chest thank you for recognizing that other people just overlook that
    Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
    90% How You React To It.

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