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    Warning The Views In This Song Are The Veiws Of The Author So........ Suck It!!!!!!!!

    artits: makengknowcentz
    album: an almost successful idiot
    song: radio waves for televison slaves

    intro= see in case studies most people that watch tv actually do so to live a fake life being fearful of their reality world.
    so in this peace i create another world where we create a complete imaginary world.
    so in arguement im stating im better then tv fakes.im hoping that real people will catch the meaning and idiots can relate to me.
    simply im saying im pathetic and if you relate you are too and if you dont then congrats on living life to its potential.


    allow the radio waves/ to invade/ a mind at post mortem/.....
    play my funeral song to detain the bordem.
    who needs reality when i can create my own?
    pack my life up and move in there where i'll create my home?
    besides lifes a bitch /and reality is her pimp/
    using the trick/ to fuck us hoping to get rich.
    everything is cable...unstable victoms to images painted/
    tainted to leave you submissive to the gimics/
    but here nothing commands... no man ....just listen and understand
    the only reality tv/ you need /has no limits
    let your imagination rome free/
    the only thing that cant be forced into slavery /
    let your brain spread its wings and move like a phoenix /
    while scenic /televised idiots sit in there coffins coughing
    getting lazy and fat /its fact they brains become anemic /
    so if you sold them that image they'll think you a genius and believe it.
    Casey Casen is a mason /
    who reads my 100 favorite songs before i know them
    now thats something amazen/
    comcast make profits/ as fake profits/
    with dreams people are chasen/while they lives eracen
    but music doesnt feed you the image just the tune that consumes
    my ears to my mouth as i sing along im the one acting it out.
    no impossible life trojected/ by improbable stunts projected/
    and there's alwasy something on if not you can eject it/
    no fake beliefs leaving you infected.no feeling neglected...
    no annoying paid programming/no demanding 30 minute sitcoms/
    to list on........id rather my 20 minute music block/
    soundtracking my day between jazz hip hop and rock.
    music influences gangs and teens/
    but no one complains of the music acted out on movie screens
    its all a story written the only difference/
    is one is harmonic so you feel the realness ..
    while the other you bare witness.to the intense events
    and have them alter your life reflecting on every tence.
    from fm to am 24 hrs am to pm/
    music evolve me from these cave men.
    to that theory of evolution.......
    not the proof that lifes waisted and we waiste it..
    .the confusion......
    isnt a solution and neither is just living life without my boom box/
    i wont survive the detox....
    and the worlds to cruel to try to duel
    a cold reality where im pathetic by
    genetics and god shows no love
    but in my imgination i can be everything above.......
    see t.v. gives you another persons lies or turths
    love and hate
    but my boom box gives me thoughts so instrumentally i
    mentally control my fate.

    hook:
    the normal people will think its fake/the smart ones will hate/
    but the stupid ones will here this and then start to relate.
    see life is to be lived and waisting it is something i cant understand.
    so if your like me and like the fans of tvl land your as pathetic as i am.... understand?
    Last edited by noncentz; January 19th, 2005 at 07:54 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn word another great one i feel bad cuz i knew where you were coming from but oh well i guess i am pathetic. anyways you expressed some nice things here. i have seen better from you but i really liked how you made me think. and it is true how people who watch tv watch to create a false reality because they are too afraid to live in a real one. nice work young scholar.

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Nice shit, amigo...

    As usual, your rhyme scheme and flow are all over the place to me.

    But also, as usual, I can't fuck with the content. Great insight into our entertainment world and how it sucks us in and makes us need it like a drug.

    I felt alotta Dej Jam Poetry on this one...really could envision someone on that stage pouring out his frustration and realization...angry like, emotional.

    Good shit, my man...

    Be peaceful!

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    thanks twin that was deep that you read this and sadly i dont think i will ever get rhyme scheme down like i should but oh well content is enough for me i appreciate that
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i like it ok, i cant concentrate when there is so many words so i just read the first 3 bars :S anyways...

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    i agree with BTK, the rhyme scheme made it hard to get through, but the content was nice
    i must be pathetic then, cuz i felt these words

    Casey Casem is a mason /
    who reads my 100 favorite songs before i know them
    now thats something amazen/

    LMAO, thought that shit was funny

    comcast make profits/ as fake profits/

    word, FUCK COMCAST, their damn service is like crack to me, and they're puttin me in debt...
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    Aesthetic Values.
    If you don't know what it means, Fuck You.

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    not a bad piece, i've definately seen much better from you. maybe i just couldn't relate to the topic. but it wasn't bad at all. the rhyme scheme was throwing me off on this one more than usual, most times i can take it. be easy, and hit up my latest, father forgive me

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    Very Nice Piece...
    Prolly The Favorite I've Checked Im My Little Reading Spree...

    I Loved The Message And The Content Of The Piece...
    It Was Very Unique And I've Never Seen Or Thought Of Anything Like It...
    Wich Is Unusually Cuz Tipically I've Thought About Every Topic Out...
    Just In Some Other Form It Was Used...
    But This Entire Thing Was Original To Me So I Looooved That...
    The Emotion In This Piece Was Very Nice...
    Vocabulary Was Flawless, Just Enough Was Used...
    Uuuum, Ya Overall There Wasnt Too Much Wrong...

    Buuuuut There Were Some Things...
    Like You're Structure, Its Alittle Disorganized...
    You Skip Around Different Rhym Styles Alot...
    Wich Is Hot When You Have Different Verses...
    When You're Switching Up In The Same Verse More Often Then Not It Wont Work...
    So Like In Your Piece You'd Have A Sick Flowing Section...
    Fallowed By A Section That Didnt Even Have Two Sylabol Multie Endings...
    Just Tryn Pick A Style And Stay Consistant With It...
    Uuuum Another Thing, Tryn Break Up Your Work...
    You've Got Alot Of Lines There Just All Clumped Together...
    Tryn Break It Up Into Verses Around 10 Lines Each And Move That Hook Inbetween...
    Like I've Had To Say Just About Everyone Here, The Reader Needs That Break...

    Uuuuum Ya Thats It...
    A Very Solid Piece Though, Not Much To Complain About...
    And I'd Apreciate It If You Could Return The Favor:

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=166626

    Thanks Alot Mayn, Stay Up...
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