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10 - Lines.
g/l.
Center Sight
JayembeE
Discussed most rules in BS.
Check in now though.
10 - Lines.
g/l.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Wreck'n with this check'n.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
check, see u on the battlefield tonight................................. (how do u post without it saying "your post is too short")
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
just press the space bar until it says 50 characters...
^ lol nice trick
I will slay thee
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make you look STUPID
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im home now, ima smoke an L and play some mech assault and probly do my verse on the side, so itl probly be up tonight, holla
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
word to that. imma drop in like 10
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Yo. Check it.
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
G/L.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
smokin on that Kay-Bizzle, lets do it!
check it..
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
GL'
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
uppin for those late night voters.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Jay
Yo. Check it.
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
^^ nice opener
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
^^^ lol nice personal....
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
^^^ naw not feelin
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
^^^ nice
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
^^^ meh not really feelin it
over all...... 7/10
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
^^ this was a nice opener.... but all the weed lines are played
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
^^^ naw not feelin
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
^^^ LMAO..... ur best bar for sure
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
^^^ meh not bad
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
^^ meh not really
overall 6.8/10
vote - Jay for the reason his verse was thorough pretty dope from beginin to end.... no hate to either.... center ur shit was dope.... that beat ta rap line was hot if ur verse was like taht throughout u wuda had my vote... i just felt some of ur lines were forced or filler
CAN YALL PLEASE DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THA RETURN VS SKROLLZ AND DW VS SKROLLZ.... SHITS GETIN MAD SLEPT ON
My Drift, the mixtape coming this summer be on the look out shit is HOT
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
lol funny opener
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
ha, nice
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
ok
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
meh
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
meh ender
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
meh
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
meh
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
ok
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
k
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
meh
yea, Jaymbee took this for having witter punches
V/JAY
hit my battles back
JMB-
I got my sights centered and what I’ve envisioned is shit,
You’re showing the similar visions of an optical toi-let,
Pretty nice opener, good wording
Your battle records is hidden, what’s the matter, you getting lit?
If your rap’s were portrayed in a mirror, you’d appear anorexic!
Good lines again. Did the mirror and his name being center sight go together, or am I reading to deep?
I checked on your lyrics, and to put it bluntly, you’re boring,
Rhymes portrayed as self portraits, nobody wants your self glory.
just rhyming words
He spits worse than Georgie Porgie, close your mouth, stop disperse!
The frontlines are in: “Keeezy fo Sheeezy”, Center Sights the worse.
didn't like this line
With this verse I conversed, rippin “short-T’s” like Hulk Hogan,
The Grim Reapers come to collect, better bring your best blessed slogans
okay closer, coulda picked a better one
CS-
he thinks he holds weight.. but this kid is so gay
theres no way.. i'll be 'blunt' cuz i hate to smoke J's
I liked it...good personal...even if it is a weed line
everytime my flows blazed its showcased u cant compete
so plan defeat.. cant u see that this man is weak?
good rhyming...thas bout' it
its bout time we speak the facts, hes completely wack
for gods sake.. the kids never used a beat ta rap!
okay at best...didn't think it was that hot
i'd have a strong case ta say this dumb-fuck-bit-words
cuz mostly 'Pirates & Steelers' come-from-Pitts-burgh
I liked this better than the one before it. This was hot.
like a shit when u try to fart, this cat takes the cake
when it comes to a big 'asshole' that, 'makes mistakes'
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah. That shit was funny.
That closer was killer, but you couldn't go punch for punch with J. Your rhyme scheme and flow was immaculate, but he had more punches that were harder hitting. Thank you for the read and the battle was close, but the vote is JMB
vote= JMB
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165447
can y'all hit this up....I don't care who you vote for....just need some feed.
uppin2
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
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