10 lines house rules im ditching to write this so hurry your shit up
Vert
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10 lines house rules im ditching to write this so hurry your shit up
.stezieb.
check and spittin
cobain who?????fill me in im not familiar with kurt
anytime of the day is when you'll find 10 guys up in-VERT
did it hurt, im serious thats alot of cock
constipated, you spit out ya ass now explain to me how you got word block
in your pocket, you will drop it, if you cock back some laxative
now what is it that explains nouns again? oh yeah adjectives
this horrid gay fuck shit his pants, took a huge dump
clogged up the toilet with not a log yup you guessed it a tree stump
10 lines you made me ditch class to battle you
i gotta go now, p.s i wrote this after lunch while holding in my poo
j/k lol im tired of school got to go to class now pz i will up this later
.stezieb.
if it's a battle that you wanted shit i'm bringin' a jihad/
don't it seem odd, how quickly you get down on ya knees hard/
knock you out till you see stars and my shine is the brightest/
and it's tough for voters to say which line of mine is the tightest/
so i'm just the nicest, dismemberin' your limbs with a smile/
you'll never reach my level kid, tho you're feelin' my style/
i'll spit this fire with lighter fluid in my saliva, stupid/
and win this like you no-showed, so don't complain' bout why you losin'/
So go do your shit when you come back you'll find out about kurt cobain
coz he was a better rapper then you, add to the fact that he was insane/
Upping for votes
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decent on both sidez but I'm no hard critic but battle goes to VERT
uppin..............uppin...................
.stezieb.
blackguy-not great stuff but threw some punches like the in-vert line and the word block shit
vert-tried to throw some punches but not too many hit and most of ur shit was S.G. and that doesnt win battles which im learning too so keep doin ur shit
vote would go to blackguy....not enough posts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164292
Ffs someone with enough posts plz vote...
4 real man Vert wins hands down no contest. blak guy needs to take the blak out of his name man
blak had a better rhyme scheme, better ideas, he just didnt connect with them, some kool personals some kool disses all in all not that bad, vert lacked a little in the rhyme scheme but had better punches, better structured rhyme, there was just something more appealing about his disses, altho i wasnt feeling the closer, wll, either of your closers, close battle but i think vert edges it, slightly better disses
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
ite thx alot center sight
1-0 uppin for more votes
can i get some honest votes from you 2?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165298 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165178
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
Can't vote...
not enuff posts sozzzzzz...
still uppin peeps...
vert wins:
blakk guy:
structure was good
the punches werent so heavy
vert:
a good structure,
flow was more continuous
threw in sum good punch lines.
verts disses were more relevant and more personal