SS Battle Verse - Needs Critique
The Nazi Suicide Note
My legacy has ended,by the way of a German gun blast...
Suicide, people will mourn, but my bequest will last...
Not in my death but in the immortal scars I have left...
Many wives and children have wept, when enemies fled...
Allied conquests have conquered in their frantic attempts...
Germany falls into the hands of allies as so forth hence...
My power relents and this steel is my proceeding destiny...
An unmatched epitome of tyranny that dictators will envy...
I've evolved into an entity, repent me, begin to respect...
As those Germans who surrender are traitors who defect...
Reflect on my image and as a triumphant public speaker...
Ponder on my death as if I was a politician or a preacher...
even against the allies, would I have been world leader...
equally Germany falls as this is in the hands of the reader...
In Love of my country, My beliefs and the grief I've spread...
For all those Nazi believers, and the Germans who now lay dead...
They've earned my respect, dying against my side splinter...
That allies defeated me, suicide's my escape... signed...A.Hitler