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[INFAH_REDD]

Me- Hey Ur Boy Just Stepped In The Game And I'm Ready 4 Anything That Comes My Way/
I Don't Beleive In Puttin' Prices On Certian People's Heads I Just Run Up On Umh And Put The Burnnuah To They Head/
Best Beleive Ur Boys Gonnuah Leave'em Dead/
Like Ti I'm Serious About Makin' This Bread /
So Pay Attchen Closely Cause I'll Leave U Filled Up Wit Lead/
Its My Time To Shine So Let Me Go On Ahead/
Boyz And Gurlz I Know U Down Wit Makin' This Bread/
U Wanna Help Ur Family But Most Of Yawl Too Dumb In Ahead/
Too Figure Out That The King Of This Site Should Be That Nicca Infah_redd/
I Know Yawl Gonnah Say Take Off The Caps Lock Make Uah Complaint And Start A Fire Like Match Box/
Thats Okay Cause I Got A Flow U Can't Nock/
Thats The Reason Ur Boy Got On His Caps Locks/
Kuz I Mean What I Say And Thats The Only Way To Express It/
Whats Lower Case Gonnuah Do But Just Piss Me Off/
Cause I Like To Be Seen And Ur Boy Aint Soft/
.................................................. ........."what!"
U Think Ur Boy Fell Off Naw I Was Takin' A Break So I Can Put This Rap Game On Pause/
I Got Yawl By The Jaws Like I Was Teachin' A Pit To Lock Jaw/
Pop Pop Their Go The Sound Of My Glock Yawl Mack-10 Said Is U Banggin' Or Can U Ball/
I Choose Banggin' Cause U Can Tell I Can Ball All I Got To Do Is Want It And I'll Be All Over The Wallz/
Wonce The Hoez Read My Shit They Be All On My Bawlz'/
Take Them To The Room And Bang Out They Wallz/
Come Back Another Day And The Fellahz Would Be Oooh My God Thats My Dawg/
So Let Me Teach U Uah Lesson About Fuckin With Me Neveuah Disrespect Me Or The Gurlz That Be All On My Team/
And Don't Battle Me Unless U Know What Ur Gonnuah Get In To/
Cause If I'm Not Down U Know Uah??? I'muah Get In U!.

[CrazyCarl]

There were a lot of lines that were stretched. Work on closer syllable count. You used the same words to rhyme a couple of times, try and switch it up.

["fi-del"]

this is ok, structure could be fixed which would help the flow. you have a few stretched lines,which also fuck's up the flow.

return the feed, check

life of a lost soul.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.