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Mc Heartless
Sylentz
10-16 lines
No crew/hate/dr votes
No bitin/recyclin/feedin
Due within 1 hour after check
safe
checkety check.........good luck blood..........
Ye Check, Good Luck, .............................
hold tight jadey james....
maybe you and stale marine animals really do have a link...
your bathin in the sea caused the fish to start to stink...
and your life aint gettin better...its only gettin worse...
the real baby died...you were jus the afterbirth...
you inherited the heritage of age-old lyrical clowns...
your genes are so weak...the breeze blew your family tree down...
thinkin that your goin n e where in the rap game...bitch listen...
you might have symptoms but your "illness" is in remission...
the whole place where you live is somewhere to be hated on...
even the birds fly upside down cuz theres nothin worth shittin on...
you think you got a cartel...a drug-ring...i said " think"...
cuz the only coke your dealin...is the pop that you drink...
that blade oracle...seen your future in tarot cards...it aint clean...
i mean i know your crew is bitchs....but the pack ran out of "queens"...
When I Said Anyone Under 500 Posts, I Actually Meant Someone Dope
This Battles Already Won, Your Time Is Done, Look In Ya Horrorscope
Your Made For The Street Life, But Built To Last, Bitch Livin In The Past
You Actually That Wack, Even To Kritikal Your One Big Outkast
And Ye To Even Attempt Match Me, You`ll Definatly Need To Say More
Cos Your Shits Even Wacker Than Britney Trying To Get An Encore
Why Do You Come Here, Your Too Wack, "Defining illness" Is This Sites Game
Your Punches Are Played,Your Rhymes Are Basic, In Other Words Your Lame
Ill Turn Ya Body Inside Out, Puttin Ya "Heart" In Ya Mouth
Then Your Sure To Be Heartless, And Really Know What Its About
Mc Heartless? Oreo Mc Flurries can drop hotter than your "rhymes"
Only way you shittin out hot raps is when diahrrea comes to mind.
Ya Lyrics Are That Bad, They Really Should Be Considered A Crime
Because You Cant Even Write A Half Descent Verse, Let Alone A Line
Safe
good battle man......safe ........whos uppin 1st me of you ?
ok people...
MC HEARTLESS...
maybe you and stale marine animals really do have a link...
your bathin in the sea caused the fish to start to stink...
good rhyme, just kinda a lame insult...
and your life aint gettin better...its only gettin worse...
the real baby died...you were jus the afterbirth...
hahaha nice line
you inherited the heritage of age-old lyrical clowns...
your genes are so weak...the breeze blew your family tree down...
nice line, good wit...
thinkin that your goin n e where in the rap game...bitch listen...
you might have symptoms but your "illness" is in remission...
good punch
the whole place where you live is somewhere to be hated on...
even the birds fly upside down cuz theres nothin worth shittin on...
OH SHIT
you think you got a cartel...a drug-ring...i said " think"...
cuz the only coke your dealin...is the pop that you drink...
played cuz
that blade oracle...seen your future in tarot cards...it aint clean...
i mean i know your crew is bitchs....but the pack ran out of "queens"...
pretty decent closer.
all and all, you had a real nice flow, easy to read, good wordplay, and each line you throwin punches...
Sylentz...
When I Said Anyone Under 500 Posts, I Actually Meant Someone Dope
This Battles Already Won, Your Time Is Done, Look In Ya Horrorscope
personally, i think you missed with this one.
Your Made For The Street Life, But Built To Last, Bitch Livin In The Past
You Actually That Wack, Even To Kritikal Your One Big Outkast
Nice use of multies
And Ye To Even Attempt Match Me, You`ll Definatly Need To Say More
Cos Your Shits Even Wacker Than Britney Trying To Get An Encore
wasnt feelin this...how are you pronouncing "ye"? threw off flow for me
Why Do You Come Here, Your Too Wack, "Defining illness" Is This Sites Game
Your Punches Are Played,Your Rhymes Are Basic, In Other Words Your Lame
semi decent punch.
Ill Turn Ya Body Inside Out, Puttin Ya "Heart" In Ya Mouth
Then Your Sure To Be Heartless, And Really Know What Its About
good personal
Mc Heartless? Oreo Mc Flurries can drop hotter than your "rhymes"
Only way you shittin out hot raps is when diahrrea comes to mind.
wack
Ya Lyrics Are That Bad, They Really Should Be Considered A Crime
Because You Cant Even Write A Half Descent Verse, Let Alone A Line
Best line, good closer
All and all, you were using the same concept to much, that being your opponent is "whack". be more creative and maybe reword youre thoughts, cuase i wasnt feelin a flow to much.
V-MC HEARTLESS
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Maybe before you vote you should try to gather the punches, Need I Say More is his krew saying.
Anyway Up 1
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yo str8 up....this dawg mc heartless ripped it up........damn dog crazy spit
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you inherited the heritage of age-old lyrical clowns...
your genes are so weak...the breeze blew your family tree down...
the whole place where you live is somewhere to be hated on...
even the birds fly upside down cuz theres nothin worth shittin on...
mc all around had better punches and a crazy flow
v/ mc heartless
I have to go with MCH too because of the punches. Sylentz had punches....just not up to par with heartless's. They were weak attempts with good concepts. If Sylentz would've worded a few better... he woulda won. Flow and rhyming were equal, its just that MC's closer killed him. My vote: Heartless
Ok thanks, up again................................
My First Up.............................................
MC our battle still on for tonight or no?
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