8-10 lines
no dr cv or biting
1 hour to drop AFTER CHECK IN
good luck
No prewritten
lez do the damn thang
AJuGGaLo
Furzt Infirmity
8-10 lines
no dr cv or biting
1 hour to drop AFTER CHECK IN
good luck
No prewritten
lez do the damn thang
checkin in..... but I don't know which of us is spittin first? you didn't really specify I aid you spit first you didn't really say k or nah... just wondering bro.
Stretchin Out Words Like Mr. Flex//
Is There A Captain On Ya Deck?//
This Dude Needs Spell Check!//
Now I Know It Ain't Words It's Text//
But If You Can't Spell, I Won't Be Bothered, Who's Next?//
check in and now you have 1 hour to spit...
good luck
*sigh*
Ready, set... HO! Are you ready to go?//
The pace you made this thread was little bit slow, so//
I see you're scared now i'll make this easy//
You'll seem illiterate when you try and read me//
Now Furzt things Furzt, i'll need to drop you in the hearst//
Droppin weak rhymes and spittin weak game you'll get buried quicker than Fred Durst//
And number two on the agenda to do to you//
Is the let the straight men turn asses in cause you love to punch the poo//
And as a closing to statement you'll write "Oh, AJuGGaLo... Ph33r!"//
I heard your resolution was to grow some balls... happy new year!//
Meh.... i worked all day... i usually do better <_< oh well. I'm not gonna make excuses.
Stretchin Out Words Like Mr. Flex//
Is There A Captain On Ya Deck?//
This Dude Needs Spell Check!//
Now I Know It Ain't Words It's Text//
But If You Can't Spell, I Won't Be Bothered, Who's Next?//
P.S.... in case it needs explaining... the illiterate pun is that you can't read body language in a net battle... so yeah... just thought i'd point that out <_<
Stretchin Out Words Like Mr. Flex//
Is There A Captain On Ya Deck?//
This Dude Needs Spell Check!//
Now I Know It Ain't Words It's Text//
But If You Can't Spell, I Won't Be Bothered, Who's Next?//
Kids a Certified Dilinquent, I mean, He struggles to follow simple rules
He's a Pure Genius, Finds ways to sink Eight balls, without playin pool..
Jea You From Australia, But only time You hip Hoppin,
............................is when your Chasing Kangaroos..
Your Past Reeks a Horrible Stench, Who Would Walk In your Shoes?..
Someone Message the Admin Change the settings that Apply..
Kid takes weeks to reply, So i suggest you change it to Long Reply..
I shouldnt come so hard on a newb, so imma just Stop..
Cause People Get paranoid when i come, Like Furzt was A Cop..
It's funny cause i'm american....
Anyway, you'll win... i don't see how I took a long time to reply and I don't know what rule I broke <_<... oh well. Just giving feedback on a verse against me... that's legal right?
Vote.
Stretchin Out Words Like Mr. Flex//
Is There A Captain On Ya Deck?//
This Dude Needs Spell Check!//
Now I Know It Ain't Words It's Text//
But If You Can't Spell, I Won't Be Bothered, Who's Next?//
^^No it's swaying and u broke the 10 line limit but whatever....
AJ, u had a few good punches in the very end of your verse which were the new year thing..that was about it...everything else seemed to be filler there....overall an ok verse that could use a bit of elevation with structure..meanin take those damned herbish bars out...nothing pisses me off more in a battle than those...your flow was ok and everything else was ok as well...
Furtz, u had a few good punches in the first 3 lines and the rest was filler...ur structure was better as was ur flow and thats why ur getting the win cuz both had only a few good punches and the rest was filler and I can't really give a win off of the punches so...
Furtz gets my vote for having a better verse...overall as far as structure and flow go...peaceezy...RTF in my sig...
Battles:
Come and get it.
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right...shyt nigga. if your comparin my punches to him and call it close? hmm
uppin this
uppin
and my bad for the apparent 'swaying' i just like to point out wrongs on others behalfs. But yeah... previous comments retracted <_< and breaking the limit by 2 words... w/e.
Stretchin Out Words Like Mr. Flex//
Is There A Captain On Ya Deck?//
This Dude Needs Spell Check!//
Now I Know It Ain't Words It's Text//
But If You Can't Spell, I Won't Be Bothered, Who's Next?//
dont worry fam. you'll elevate. but at the moment. i am uppin' this
juggalo-u started off callin him a ho? ya flow was kinda basic..no dissses no wordplay,the resolution line was softer than granny tits...it was semi ok
furzt-ya flow was cool.structure str8 i liked the eight balls...and not playin pool probably the best line out the both verses,it wasnt just grade a it was cool needed more creativity but u got the win...
v-furzt
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i thought furzt rhymes were sharper and obviously he was a more expierenced battler no excuses just tighter lines
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