fuck people

[jizza]

I've seen so many travesties on this site its ridiculous.....
crews ridin' dicks and shit...................I'm just sick of it.
I'm rollin' solo so no ho can take my trust and run with it,
I've been caught with some intent to bust a fukker, punish him,
I don't need a back-up squad like all these mods to feel I'm safe,
RB mobs like "we da shit" its funny how they feel when cake,
is in they face, they loyal souls will break and split from all they friends,
Thats why I'm stayin by myself and takin all the credit then,
I'm selfish but intelligent, been hellabent for three months straight,
I'm ballin' hard and sellin' shit, an elaphant can't hold my weight,
My swollen bank's about to bust, but nothin' will uphold my state,
Louisiana born and raised, I'm livin' at my chosen rate.
When I die its armageddon, all these weapons go and chase,
the people quick and mow they places down like grass, the bullets grazin,
all they faces, cryin out when nukes come flyin, dyin out,
eatin on my metal snub, so many slugs they pukin out,
iron diets, I am biased, to nothing but the president,
The residents of this country lyin bout the evidence,
I am bout to sever ties with all my people and my past,
live my life if you don't like it, you can kiss on my white ass.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...21#post1941021


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...24#post1941024

[Demon Pyrokronix]

You're joking right?

"I'm rollin' solo so no ho can take my trust and run with it,
I've been caught with some intent to bust a fukker, punish him,"

what are you describing the conversion you made to homsexuality?

[jizza]

I'm talkin about the dude caught with my girl dumb ass, bust means shoot stupid..fuck....for bein 8-1 you a plain dumb ass. What is on your mind.....you must be thinkin some perverted shit right? anyone can see what I meant.

[jizza]

keep your dumb ass in england. Drink your coffee and eat your crumpets.....play some cricket or something

[Lay Doubt.]

ziiiiiiiiiiiiiiing. ^

anyway, this was a quality drop. i was feelin' this ish a lot. it's smart to not get up in a crew anyway.. nice job, keep 'em comin'.

[warchild]

this was a nice drop, structure and flow were on point, good subject and i liked the residents hiding the evidence line, that was cool.
hit up my last post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162318

[darkeyez]

Content: Great I very much see the angle you are coming from, there seems emotion and passion behind what you are trying to convay.

Flow: ah! The hardest thing in the world too get right, in my option. There is flow to a degree. So it was easy to follow.

Vocabulary: simple but effective….. and the lines were coherent and not forced!

Umm: would love to hear that to a chilled passionate beat type thing

All in all I like the drop and would like to see more from you….will be following with interest!

DarkEyeZ

[jizza]

thanx.....some real feedback for once, instead of.....I liked this dope piece. Much appreciated dawg

[Kill.]

a man good drop

[DALC]

I suppose structure was good.
It just is regular,like every other written work on this site.
Anyways keep getting better.

[Demon Pyrokronix]

I'm talkin about the dude caught with my girl dumb ass, bust means shoot stupid..fuck....for bein 8-1 you a plain dumb ass. What is on your mind.....you must be thinkin some perverted shit right? anyone can see what I meant.

My record is 9-1 (one vote away from being 10-1, links in my sig) actually and I am no dumb ass.

if you want me to seriously critique your open mic I will.

and btw I don't appreciate your racist remarks about my nationality.

[Gengar]

lol you need an E-Hug...

[jizza]

whatever dude.....you can not aprreciate it all you want but you came with the homo shit so I came with the other shit.....If you don't want to be insulted, don't say shit to me.