yep.......
yep.......
- King Tone
ok safe...set the rules man....
already set em' n bitchslapped, 8 lines, house rules, due n 1 hour
- King Tone
yeh ok....n like i said in bitchslapped.....you drop 1st....
ok?
Mods, jus banned this fake, this MC aint got tha Heart 2 battle me
Puttin 2 Clones on my shoulders, tha only way u get a Double You over me
Took this problem child n sloved while is body dissolves n piles
Im tearin off tha roof while this kid's slowly chippin off tha tiles
Tryna elevate, n have me cover shyt up, heartless iz scared
But we all kno this dudes never makin tha cut like dull silverware
Fuk this fake mc, and jus fuk everything he's ever been about
I spit fillers like this.........n still merk em' leavin em' passed out
- King Tone
okay....okay.....
yo...mak trained...you a bitch...and your lines have no relevance.....
when i say your crews "thick"....im talkin bout intelligence....
suckin my dick??? nah your gettin throatfucked cuz you in hoe mode...
il pound my verse into your skull so you can hear it in morse code....
this verse couldnt be more "heavy" if it was lead-filled....
so shook...you'l lose more sweat than a texan on a treadmill....
your ryhmes are weak ..you aint liftin the bar...jus stop it.....
the only way you'd "drop dope" is if coke fell out ya pocket.....
peace.....
o shyt, that 3rd line btw iz supposed 2 say "took this problem child n solved em' while his body dissolves n piles"
i wuz rushin it cuz i thought i had somewhere 2 go but it got canceled
- King Tone
okay bro....no probz man......
Ahh nice verses from both sides. Heres my break down.
Makeveli
Mods, jus banned this fake, this MC aint got tha Heart 2 battle me
Puttin 2 Clones on my shoulders, tha only way u get a Double You over me
NICE, PERSONAL ASWELL, GOOD PUNCH
Took this problem child n sloved while is body dissolves n piles
Im tearin off tha roof while this kid's slowly chippin off tha tiles
GOOD MULTI USE
Tryna elevate, n have me cover shyt up, heartless iz scared
But we all kno this dudes never makin tha cut like dull silverware
NA NOT FEELIN THIS
Fuk this fake mc, and jus fuk everything he's ever been about
I spit fillers like this.........n still merk em' leavin em' passed out
NICE NICE, GOOD ENDING
HEARTLESS
yo...mak trained...you a bitch...and your lines have no relevance.....
when i say your crews "thick"....im talkin bout intelligence....
OK
suckin my dick??? nah your gettin throatfucked cuz you in hoe mode...
il pound my verse into your skull so you can hear it in morse code....
NICE, LIKED THIS
this verse couldnt be more "heavy" if it was lead-filled....
so shook...you'l lose more sweat than a texan on a treadmill....
LMAO, NICE
your ryhmes are weak ..you aint liftin the bar...jus stop it.....
the only way you'd "drop dope" is if coke fell out ya pocket.....
NA NOT FEELIN THIS.
This one goes to makeveli. Simply because of his personal start. Very close tho
NO HATE
Hit me up vs southern finest
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=162301
ok ......safe for the feedback though man.......uppin.....
ok...uppin man...........................................
Makaveli Trained
Mods, jus banned this fake, this MC aint got tha Heart 2 battle me
Puttin 2 Clones on my shoulders, tha only way u get a Double You over me
first line-okay. second line-no.. that's wack.
Took this problem child n sloved while is body dissolves n piles
Im tearin off tha roof while this kid's slowly chippin off tha tiles
first line-played... violence = meh. second line=played too. nah.
Tryna elevate, n have me cover shyt up, heartless iz scared
But we all kno this dudes never makin tha cut like dull silverware
first line-filler. second line-lol.. nice, best line of your verse.
Fuk this fake mc, and jus fuk everything he's ever been about
I spit fillers like this.........n still merk em' leavin em' passed out
nah, wack closer.. no punch
mc heartless
yo...mak trained...you a bitch...and your lines have no relevance.....
when i say your crews "thick"....im talkin bout intelligence....
first line-filler.. second line-meh
suckin my dick??? nah your gettin throatfucked cuz you in hoe mode...
il pound my verse into your skull so you can hear it in morse code....
first line-meh @ suckin' dick line. second line-aiight, decent.
this verse couldnt be more "heavy" if it was lead-filled....
so shook...you'l lose more sweat than a texan on a treadmill....
first line-self glory, nah. second line-best line of battle, i laughed at this imagery.. good shit.
your ryhmes are weak ..you aint liftin the bar...jus stop it.....
the only way you'd "drop dope" is if coke fell out ya pocket.....
first line-filler. second line-played as fuck.
anyway, yeah.. there wasn't many good lines in this battle. a lot of fillers. the dopest line of this battle goes to mc though. "texan on a treadmill"... that's what won the battle for mc in my opinion. it was creative and funny.. other than that.. meh battle.
Vote-mc heartless for a more solid verse.
pz.
safe for the feedback........although you always put verses down....and i read some of yours and they aint that hot......n e ways .....uppin......
meh @ that. i can come dope if i need to. check my battle vs. Effect or Tic. you already saw my topical vs. ILLunatic. why waste dope concepts when you can beat them without them? nah mean? pz.
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