castro spit crack and post it up like a flyer/i spit the truth most of u lyer/stay strap holding the fire /while ya phone tap and you rolling wit wire/now a day im flipping bird/pitching on bigger curb /cause im after bread like pigeon bird/buissnes i handle boss/ clap then the hammer toss/im leaving nigga suit red like santa claus/leaking out pasta/non of these nigga thug they play hard/they should earn themself a oscar / .................easy
~ca$tro~
need feedback
~ca$tro~
i'm diggin' it kid...should of made it longer
you need to post actual replies^
this was too short and you should really put your lines into lines. you got multi's down but the subject matter and vocab was plain. you should try an original subject with your multi skills, it would be interesting to read.
keep posting, keep elavating.
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You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
that didnt make any sense. ya need to boost your structure, but your rhymes were nice. keep workin you aight
its okay,,done before the same type gangsta kill flip a bird type rhyme..i like the pigeion refernce tho eybody got different styles i cant hate that..needed length overall longer bars..elevation..creativitiy ..one
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