10 lines
no crew/bullshit/d/r votes
due by mid night
10 lines
no crew/bullshit/d/r votes
due by mid night
yo ur sweatin so perfusely u turn on a fan/
but ur sweat starts to rust that metal worm cummin outa ur hand/
i can feel ur fear likea an iraqi feels pain/
stuck in a battle with me make anigga go insane/
see ur rymes r so weakk thay cant lift weights/
ur so unfocused even wen u shit u gotta concentrate/
so just contemplate/
all those nightmares in ur head/
turnin into 1 big monsta that wishes u dead/
with horns growin out hhis head/
ur so scared u regret all those bad disses u said/............
man fuck only 10 lines i cant end it oo well...
AesopAesopAesop
o ya the metal thing cumin out of his hand refers to his avatar
AesopAesopAesop
your rhymes: lost structure and has little flows//my flow will make u scream and get scared more dan da ride nitro//my structure already killed u in da present, now im going in da past 2 destroy your future//u failed in learning how 2 use a punchline so i'll hire u a tutor//my bullets will go through your heart and give u heartburn more than a variety of hot chillis//dis nigga tells more "fairytales" more dan his own stories//i hate battling niggas who think the're hotter dan everyone else//ur a "matyr" for me so u "sacrificed yourself"//if u come 2 my hood you'll hit da concrete faster then dead birds//i'll have u dieing before u can hit da age of mr.burns//i'll put some spice into dis battle cause your making it boring//da only time u elevate is when............................
.........u scroll up da rap battle forums.................//
o my god do u like aesop rock!!!>!> please say yes
i will when u vote and explain who won............
uppin............................................. ........
if u didnit get it it is aesop stories uppin...........2
I fetl aeso more I think his flow was better with more personals closure and that he extended his vocab more so my vote aeso and hey hit up on my link peace.
yo ur sweatin so perfusely u turn on a fan/
but ur sweat starts to rust that metal worm cummin outa ur hand/
OK
i can feel ur fear likea an iraqi feels pain/
stuck in a battle with me make anigga go insane/
AVERAGE
see ur rymes r so weakk thay cant lift weights/
ur so unfocused even wen u shit u gotta concentrate/
GOOD
so just contemplate/
SET UP..
all those nightmares in ur head/
turnin into 1 big monsta that wishes u dead/
with horns growin out hhis head/
NAH
ur so scared u regret all those bad disses u said/............
NO... 5/10
your rhymes: lost structure and has little flows//my flow will make u scream and get scared more dan da ride nitro//
NICE
my structure already killed u in da present, now im going in da past 2 destroy your future//u failed in learning how 2 use a punchline so i'll hire u a tutor//
OK
my bullets will go through your heart and give u heartburn more than a variety of hot chillis//dis nigga tells more "fairytales" more dan his own stories//
NICE.. BAD SET UP
i hate battling niggas who think the're hotter dan everyone else//ur a "matyr" for me so u "sacrificed yourself"//
NICE
if u come 2 my hood you'll hit da concrete faster then dead birds//i'll have u dieing before u can hit da age of mr.burns//
WELL NICE.. BUT MR BURNS IS PRETTY OLD SO YOUR OPPENENT CAN STILL LIVE LONG
i'll put some spice into dis battle cause your making it boring//da only time u elevate is when............................
.........u scroll up da rap battle forums.................//
NICE ENDING... 7.5/10
v/ bloods.. can't vote till i get my old name back
you both need to up i vote for aesop cuz i thought they were the same but bloods what fucking annoying to read
dis is bullshit man dis my last up i some slow asses
bloods gets my votes.......its simple to see that his was better structured with more punches and he bascially KOd the kid...sop's was jus mostly biggin himself up....try hittin your oppenent sop maan.... safe......hit my link...
bloods i felt a lot more betta punches aesop blabbered abit about himself.
v/b
now please return the favour n let me end this nigger!!! > http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161733