Makeveli vs Journalist

[Tony B]

u kno tha rules
g'luck

[Journalist]

yea..checkin in...spit ya shit...den ill do mines..in a few afta u homie..

[Tony B]

1st off, if ya don’t get it, then DON’T FUKIN VOTE

*look at tha battle n his sig, n u’ll c wut I mean
**Mary J. Blidge iz a singer

If ya supposed ta b hot, then y ya gotta explain ya barz dude?*
Now ima Deliver J this Blow like Mailin Prostitutes
Im dimishin this fag, his punches aint eva close 2 comin hard
Uppin his threads iz tha only time hes Raisin tha Bar
Ya flow resembles ya love life n just about every way
People obsessed wit professional singers wouldn’t even Mary J**
Like money from other countries, this bitch iz completely worthless
N this dude couldn’t Bring Life ta his verses if he Birthed it

[Journalist]

shittin me..lmfoa..smh...ya lines is played..done heard em..wow..

**Opener=1bar,punches..personals..wordplay**
J's flows is TO-HOT dis dude will dismantle ya face wit 2SHOTS "Makeveli" Ill Make u die so u can really "Resemble" Tu-PAC

**just some fun=bar2...personals..
Ya record? dis loss will MAKE-ya-LESS u suck and u good for PASTIN-TEXT "MAKEVELI" against Journalist dis time u cant FAKE-YA-DEATH

**Finnisher**
U NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U

lmfoa..

explanations..

SELFEXPLANITORY..
JUST HAD TO GO HISTORY ON HIS ASS (MAKEVELI) SMH..

[Tony B]

well u came played 2, every1 has used those lines on me

i ced 8 lines n u 4 some reason only dropped 6 AND i ced no feeding
"NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U"
^^^^thas feeding

[Journalist]

well u came played 2, every1 has used those lines on me

i ced 8 lines n u 4 some reason only dropped 6 AND i ced no feeding
"NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U"
^^^^thas feeding

smh..lmfao...no..i was just lettin u know y..u asked a question and i suggested y..nigga...feeding..is where i tear ya hol fuccin verse..and put it in a feedVerse..i didnt do..dat...and implus ya name is Makevelie..wtf they gonna say..cept wut i said..common sense not much to say..bout dat name..so...psh...smh..lmfao..Uppin#1

[Tony B]

upps..........vote ppl

[Journalist]

upppp dis damn battle man........................uppin numba 2

[Journalist]

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp..numba 3.....VOTE..PLEASE DAMN

[Tony B]

Vote Ppl!!!!!

[Tony B]

come on ppl, vote

[BIGGUNZ]

trained:

If ya supposed ta b hot, then y ya gotta explain ya barz dude?*
Now ima Deliver J this Blow like Mailin Prostitutes
^ nice feelin
Im dimishin this fag, his punches aint eva close 2 comin hard
Uppin his threads iz tha only time hes Raisin tha Bar
^ nice
Ya flow resembles ya love life n just about every way
People obsessed wit professional singers wouldn’t even Mary J**
^ iight
Like money from other countries, this bitch iz completely worthless
N this dude couldn’t Bring Life ta his verses if he Birthed it
^ ugly closer


Journalist:

**Opener=1bar,punches..personals..wordplay**
J's flows is TO-HOT dis dude will dismantle ya face wit 2SHOTS "Makeveli" Ill Make u die so u can really "Resemble" Tu-PAC
^ nice

**just some fun=bar2...personals..
Ya record? dis loss will MAKE-ya-LESS u suck and u good for PASTIN-TEXT "MAKEVELI" against Journalist dis time u cant FAKE-YA-DEATH
^ iight

**Finnisher**
U NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U
^ iight

thought you pushed all your multis and didnt like your format other than that you had some good punches just thought mak had better and they conected in the right places

V. mak close one good battle yall

[Tony B]

last up ppl, stop sleepin rb, VOTE!

[PuffNGive]

Makaveli trained-

*look at tha battle n his sig, n u’ll c wut I mean
**Mary J. Blidge iz a singer

If ya supposed ta b hot, then y ya gotta explain ya barz dude?*
Now ima Deliver J this Blow like Mailin Prostitutes
--- no flow... ok punch(+.5) wordplay(+1) 1.5/3
Im dimishin this fag, his punches aint eva close 2 comin hard
Uppin his threads iz tha only time hes Raisin tha Bar
--- playd flowe ok (+.5).5/3
Ya flow resembles ya love life n just about every way
People obsessed wit professional singers wouldn’t even Mary J**
--- ok diss(+.5), Good flow(+1), wordplay(+1) 2.5/3
Like money from other countries, this bitch iz completely worthless
N this dude couldn’t Bring Life ta his verses if he Birthed it
--- goof flow(+1), nice wordplay(+1), nice finisher(+1)3/3
---overall 7.5/12
Journalist--

J's flows is TO-HOT dis dude will dismantle ya face wit 2SHOTS "Makeveli" Ill Make u die so u can really "Resemble" Tu-PAC
---Good punch(+1), good flow(+1) 2/3
Ya record? dis loss will MAKE-ya-LESS u suck and u good for PASTIN-TEXT "MAKEVELI" against Journalist dis time u cant FAKE-YA-DEATH
--- good flow(+1) you allready made fun of his name 1/3
U NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U
--- ok flow but coulda worded it better(+.5) ok punch(+1)1.5/3
--- overall4.5/9

----vote goes to makeveli for comin harder and havin an overall better verse...
hit a battle from my sig up honestly

[Assazin]

Originally posted by:Makeveli
If ya supposed ta b hot, then y ya gotta explain ya barz dude?*
Now ima Deliver J this Blow like Mailin Prostitutes
^^THIS WAS A GOOD OPENER I LIKED IT
Im dimishin this fag, his punches aint eva close 2 comin hard
Uppin his threads iz tha only time hes Raisin tha Bar
^^THIS WAS A GOOD PERSONAL AND PUNCH
Ya flow resembles ya love life n just about every way
People obsessed wit professional singers wouldn’t even Mary J**
^^THIS WAS GOOD NAMEPLAY USAGE REALLY GOOD
Like money from other countries, this bitch iz completely worthless
N this dude couldn’t Bring Life ta his verses if he Birthed it
^^THIS WAS PROBLY YA WEAKEST POINT IN YA SPIT BUT YOU SPIT GOOD IS FUCK...

you already had punches,personals,and nameplay and beutiful structure so let's see what the other kat brings...

Originally posted by:Journalist
J's flows is TO-HOT dis dude will dismantle ya face wit 2SHOTS "Makeveli" Ill Make u die so u can really "Resemble" Tu-PAC
^^THIS WAS A MEH OPENER BECAUSE ON WEAK PERSONAL AND IT'S PLAYED KAT'S ALREADY USED THAT SHIT ALL THE TIME AND UNLESS YOUR GONNA USE PAC DRIFTS THEN YOU GOTTA COME HOT AS FUCK
Ya record? dis loss will MAKE-ya-LESS u suck and u good for PASTIN-TEXT "MAKEVELI" against Journalist dis time u cant FAKE-YA-DEATH
^^AGAIN YOU DIDN'T COME WITH NO REAL PUNCH AND YOU USED ANOTHER PLAYED CONCEPT
U NICE DUDE? dats like sayin..da sky Nights BLUEAnd i explain my fucking "verse" cuz theres retarted people on dis board JUST-LIKE-U
^^THIS WAS A WEAK ENDING BECAUSE YOU FED OFF OF HIS VERSE WHICH MEANS THAT YOU GET DQ'D PZ.....

you shouldn't explain your verse that's real newbish,if you drop your verse right then it would be self explanatory so elevate on all that ..

V/Mak
for overall better punches and personals and usage of nameplay...

pz...