10 lines
house rules
due by midnight
LIl'Wyte
Makeveli Trained
10 lines
house rules
due by midnight
- King Tone
Niggaz gettin trampled on, what's all the fuss about?
Suckin my dick so hard, I'm bustin in they mouth
And then I snuff em out, four to the mid', fuck what I did
With no regard for a bid, ripped you up, while you wit your kid
Slid into the shadows, cause I'm dark like that
I bark like that, jet black, but I spark like that
Where ARE they at, when I get thirsty, shit
Ain't a nigga strong enough to stand the worst it gets
Bits, and pieces are all thats that left
Niggaz so scared to death, they hold they motherfuckin breath
til I pass, cause they asked/assed, and I smelled em
The S-P-E-L-L-E-D T-H-E-M, I spelled em
To make me have to swell one, eye up, lump up one head
Catch a body with the shottie, pump up one dead
Red alert, niggaz is about to get hurt, do work
to skirts, like a jag on the merk
^^^^wtf, ced 10 lines, not 16
- King Tone
*jus n case ya don’t kno, Warren Sapp iz number 29
**hes n tha process of getting merked by Tha Joka
Like a plummer, ya ‘Flows’ ova, put a stop 2 tha ‘Leak’
This wuz ya biggest ‘mi-steak’, thas wut I think of ur ‘beef’
Stepped incorrect, so ima leave this nigga wit a brain lapse
Im tha type ta take 2,9’s 2 ya chest like Warren Sapp*
Smash this dude wit an ‘Hourglass’ n leave his mind on tha ‘Sand’
Cuz when it comes 2 killin lames, I got tha ‘time on my hands’
This dudes ‘Constipated’ cuz he don’t know ‘Shyt’
Tha best battle this dude had wuz his no-show spit
Jus look by his fukin av, he holds no weight, this shyts ova
I knew this dude wuz a ‘Clown’, he got merked by The ‘Joka’**
- King Tone
Lil-your shit was wack anyways man...you had 6 more lines...and you still got merked...your flow was alright...your structure was uneven...you worded alot of your lines terrible...your punches and personals didnt even hit hard as they could have....and your rhymes were...played...
Mak-your shit was descent...your flow was intact...your structure was built nicely...your personals..and punches were eh...ok...umm..creativity in ya verse was good..and you worded ya lines well enough...overall good job...ez merk..
Best Line Of The Battle
^niceJus look by his fukin av, he holds no weight, this shyts ova
I knew this dude wuz a ‘Clown’, he got merked by The ‘Joka’
v/mak
Lil- Im gonna be honest. I skipped a couple lines in your verse. It was way too long. Mak said 10 lines. Not 16. Your flow was off at times, and your personals werent worded right to be used like that. lines were kinda long too. notbad.
Mak- I really liked this verse. the best line was
"This dudes ‘Constipated’ cuz he don’t know ‘Shyt’
Tha best battle this dude had wuz his no-show spit"
great punch. I liked it. Flow was pretty good through out.
lines were kinda long too. but overall, your punches were a lot stronger than his. better closer too.
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LIl'Wyte-
Niggaz gettin trampled on, what's all the fuss about?
Suckin my dick so hard, I'm bustin in they mouth
Played, needed better wording
And then I snuff em out, four to the mid', fuck what I did
With no regard for a bid, ripped you up, while you wit your kid
made no sence, not insult self glorification
Slid into the shadows, cause I'm dark like that
I bark like that, jet black, but I spark like that
filler
Where ARE they at, when I get thirsty, shit
Ain't a nigga strong enough to stand the worst it gets
Dont rhyme
Bits, and pieces are all thats that left
Niggaz so scared to death, they hold they motherfuckin breath
dont rhyme
til I pass, cause they asked/assed, and I smelled em
The S-P-E-L-L-E-D T-H-E-M, I spelled em
made no sence to me, no insult, no punch
To make me have to swell one, eye up, lump up one head
Catch a body with the shottie, pump up one dead
no insult
Red alert, niggaz is about to get hurt, do work
to skirts, like a jag on the merk
pain full ending.
Makeveli Trained-
Like a plummer, ya ‘Flows’ ova, put a stop 2 tha ‘Leak’
This wuz ya biggest ‘mi-steak’, thas wut I think of ur ‘beef’
Aight-whatch your wording, but you killed him already
Stepped incorrect, so ima leave this nigga wit a brain lapse
Im tha type ta take 2,9’s 2 ya chest like Warren Sapp*
Nope
Smash this dude wit an ‘Hourglass’ n leave his mind on tha ‘Sand’
Cuz when it comes 2 killin lames, I got tha ‘time on my hands’
Weak punch but your well ahead
This dudes ‘Constipated’ cuz he don’t know ‘Shyt’
Tha best battle this dude had wuz his no-show spit
Aight
Jus look by his fukin av, he holds no weight, this shyts ova
I knew this dude wuz a ‘Clown’, he got merked by The ‘Joka’**
Feelin the ending.
LIl'Wyte-need more practice, better structure and some new vocab
Makeveli Trained- you got my vote, nice flow and some punches-
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Yo.. I'll fuckin...I'll puke, eat it, and FUCK your Battle I'm too weeded to Speak The only key that I see to defeat you would be for me to remove These two Adidas and beat you and force feed you 'em both, and on each feet is a cleat shoe I'll lift you off your feet so fast with a roundhouse
you'll think I pulled the fuckin ground out from underneath you Bitch! I ain't no fuckin G, I'm a cannibal I ain't tryin to shoot you,I'm tryin to chop you into pieces and eat you Wrap you in rope and plastic, stab you with broken glass and have you with open gashes strapped to a soakin mattress Coke and acid, black magic, cloaks and daggers Fuck the planet, until it spins on a broken axis I'm so bananas I'm showin up to your open casket to fill it full of Explosive gasses and close it back with a lit match in it while I sit back and just hope it catches Blow you to fragments Laugh, roll you and smoke the ashes
wtf??? you postin a second verse ? i think i heard that before,
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^^^^i think some1 about 2 cry, he tried 2 diss me but came weak again, lol
im supposed 2 b scared of u on tha internet, Lmao, u cant b serious
- King Tone
Lil Wyte... what the fuck? Your verse was garbage.......sounded like some wannabe 50 rap.
Vote-Makaveli for throwing punches and having better flow.
Makeveli Trained-not a free post, but shouldnt that be a dq? for a second verse?
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double dq!!!! that verse he posted was from another battle that looks like a no show-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160501
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I dunno what LiL White was doing.. I liked he's Multi's a little but other then that his disses weren't as on point as Mak's was. & WTF@ the extra verses?
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Vote Mak, Lil wyte, verse was all indirect, u gotta come at ur opponet, not talk about people in general, nothin really was quotable in this battle, Mak did enuff to take the win, he had some decent punches,and good structure, So my vote goes to Mak, for an overall better verse with harder hittin punches
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