My People

[Chronic Cancer]

My people, open ya eyes
For too long the prize has been in sight
And yet remain untouched..
Resting on a mountain surrounded by jagged terrain
Though most have refrained
Some rebelled
What mindstate should one expect when subjecting
People to hell
Contentment's elusive amidst the abusive poison of power
America's historical jew has been overwhelmed by racism's shower
Weaker men cower behind veils in executive suites
Ever in fear of position, possessions among the social elite
Even as you speak the plague of power plays continue
Infecting all men and yes...it's also in you
Hatred doesn't discriminate, it's based upon reaction to life
Eliminating unbiased minds to the satisfaction of strife
We've all been fed dreams so long that in the day that we wake
We find reality laced with disproportion and we're kept at the gates
From Genesis to Revelation~ this will end where it started
Greedy men are needy men~ Why do you think heaven's guarded
If deception reaches perception and understands where your heart is
Then wisdom whispers intelligence to all~ My people, walk with caution!!


I gotta a whole gang of this shit tell me if i should post more like this topical shit!!!!

[SirusX]

Dope.

I really liked that peice. your very smart, or perseptive...
The verse was nice. Not alot of wordplay ect.. but it
didnt need it. I like the concept and i think about this
sometimes. so it was impactful to me. nice verse, keep it up.


Also look at my peice : Keep it straight.

[milonelion]

Dope indeed.

decent structure, the flow was good, then gets tough to keep up with, but still a decent flow. vocab was great, but like Sirus said, not alot of wordplay. but it's still a nice drop. keep elevatin'

check out: Young Heads.

[Omniscient]

Dope kid,nice drop dogg it seems like every piece um seen from u has been good and i like that...good vocab,good structure and hot flow!!!Keep it up dogg...holla back

[Chronic Cancer]

uppin

[MagicMind]

dope man...that was amazin..everythin played inta each other..flow was amazin....good job keep it comin

[Chronic Cancer]

TnX, i guess you can call me the "Real Mix" LOL

Uppin

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

But this was ok man...I didnt really like the structure of it though that much, But it still flowed pretty decent I thought....Vocab was nice too, didnt really over do it like some of these people do, its crazy like that....But yeah man, nothing really bad about it, just didnt like the structure all that much...But overall it was a nice read man...Keep at it.

If you get a chance check my piece out called "Good Morning, Beautiful"

[Shadowsk8er]

all i got to say about this was good man....good choice of vocab...good topic...good flo...i was feelin this piece .....keep at it

[Chronic Cancer]

uppin

[Saiyan]

Nice Lines And Vocab..Nice Flow...All I Got 2 Say..

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