10 lines
3-0 KO
first to 5
nunathat bullshit
10 lines
3-0 KO
first to 5
nunathat bullshit
ok homes, includin the vote shit.. imma spit soon
I'm typin' to this faggot, let me set the Record straight,
You were born to lose dawg, you shouldn't mess with fate.
I'm here to break Record's, but I bet this bitch skips,
prolly out chasin' pussy, but never gets'em a lick.
It's okay puppy, I ain't gonna hurt you,
I'm just gonna suffocate you, till your lips turn purple.
you better stay alert too, its easy to get physical,
and after the deeds done, its easier to get rid of you,
I just sit back laughin', your spits a tragic piece,
remember, if you don't make it rappin', they need Catholic priests.
Jizza
to get jizzed on, means to get facialized and this cats named jizza
bitch couldnt come hard in 1 slice, so ill slice him like pizza
i shoulda called out improved dudes, cause bitch is like wack newbz
and when girls told him to get bigger balls...........
.............this stupid cat got fake boobs
and now that hes introduced imma pick ur punches, like apples on a tree
and wen i set battles up with him, it always says "kill this wannabee mc"
im just no weight under my name, but imma prove it mistaken
cause if im rb legend, then u must be hall of shame then
ur flow fuked up from the start, u need help for ur ability of lackness
cuase if pratice makes perfect........
........ u proved it wrong cause of ur wackness
look, im not even gonna break it down....record threw harder punches, had better rhymes flow and structure, so he took this one no doubt.
v/record fer shizzle
we need votes
jizzas verse simply came stronger as far as rhyme scheme goes. an example of records poor rhyming would be his first bar. jizza and pizza doesnt work. jizzas verse is also neater looking, and has better flow. jizza also doesnt stretch the personals too far like record did. for these reasons i pick jizza.
vote - jizza
p.s. please hit the battle in my sig, thanks
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
pretty shit vote if ya think about it... u did not mention the punches just structure.. wack vote.. no bitchin but yeh read it, doesnt mention punches n metas.
stop ya bitchin' bitch, its fair.
suk a dik u noe it aint.. no comments about punches aint fair,, and yes its a vote so shut the fuk up... uppin
i think record is gay, and it has 1 testicle. i know, im his sister.
^^ wtf my sis has a nik on this site.. wack shit,, uppin 2 for this battle
jizza-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, aight punches but nuthin too hard
record-shaky flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were aight but too simplistic
Overall-i think jizza came more consistent, had a better flow, lil more creative. Record ya shit was good throwin buncha disses but the disses were too simple n not hard hittin.
vote-jizza
go vote on one my battles
n i'll come back and poll, thanx.
you forgot to poll vote
nah i didn't............................^^
read bottom of my post
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