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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    Black Knights (ft. Jai-Cee)

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    The Holy Grail part 2, enjoy.


    (Hook)
    The saga continues, the trail of the grail
    Lyrics ricochet as the story sets sail
    Listeners turn pale, behold the fight tourney
    This is the story of the black knight’s journey

    (Johnny 6-feet)
    A hundred years in the future from the grail part one
    Another quest for the cup is about to start son
    My name is 6-feet, a soldier with a heart of greed
    A psychopath who tears opponents apart, bleed!
    I’d heard of a story told by the old and frail
    About the legend of the hip-hop holy grail
    With my sword in its sheath and my armour on my back
    I’d bring harm to the wack and turn my karma black
    I was sworn in as a knight by a notorious king
    Because I’d seen the riches, the victorious bring
    It was a glorious thing, destroying the innocent
    On this path that I walked without sins I’d repent
    I found the oasis in the dessert of despair
    The lone warrior guard, now how is this fair?
    We clashed steel and mics, I could feel the fight
    But he was like “You should heed the light!”
    I couldn’t believe him right, my sword entered his skin
    My words were centred to win, no respect for his kin
    As he fell, I saw the scrap of paper stashed in his pockets
    I looted the said item, read it and dropped it
    It told me of the speaker box palace, where the chalice
    Could be found, protected by a man of cold malice
    So my assault continued, I left at a rush
    The next step was made plain, let’s continue to push

    (Hook)
    The saga continues, the trail of the grail
    Lyrics ricochet as the story sets sail
    Listeners turn pale, behold the fight tourney
    This is the story of the black knight’s journey

    (Jai-Cee)
    Jai-Cee the black knight hunting for the hallowed grail…
    In the dank night travelling across many harrowed vales…
    Tracing the track of those who already voyaged beyond…
    Facing the wrath of persons who are now toiled and gone…
    A mic to appease the bloody nature of an MC diseased…
    With the least of ease to find the grail that’s to be reached…
    In the cranial eaves thinking the journey is undemanding…
    Envy commanding as evil demands the grail is enchanting…
    The seeds have been planted and the conquest grows stronger…
    No longer haunted, only taunted by the holy grails wonder…
    Ponder on the distance toured and how to reap the rewards…
    Onwards to the recompense and to battle in verbal onslaught…
    Anyone who attempts to stop me will be banished by discord…
    The crusade moves forth and progresses on an onward course…
    Toward the grail and gets closer bar by bar, still seeming to far…
    Taking apart challengers quickly, because no heathens to hard…
    It becomes nearer and sentiments acknowledge its splendour…
    Endeavour to approach the castle my life to which I’ll surrender…
    Be remembered as the voyager who found the sacred palace…
    To forever caress in my hands the holy grails sanctified chalice…
    Cause malice and conflict as I’m close to wielding its powers…
    Now my evil will realise is impending rule in this final hour…
    I reach the grail; see the chalice that has no immediate glory…
    Surely the story was no myth; my bent will did implore me…
    Because the cup before me held no significance to the task…
    Reaching for the trophy I saw the burnt ashes from the past…
    Reluctant to proceed as the need was becoming to great…
    I envisioned flames burning and pain in my immediate fate…
    I take the sacred prize, my eyes started to glisten with distress…
    As horsemen from an apocalypse my body the start to caress…
    Then a flicker of fire and the burning commences to take over…
    I have become the new fallen, into the remains of a dark soldier…

    (Hook)
    The saga continues, the trail of the grail
    Lyrics ricochet as the story sets sail
    Listeners turn pale, behold the fight tourney
    This is the story of the black knight’s journey

    and finito... feedback?

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    www.theilleffect.com djb's Avatar
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    wow this definately deserves a nom for the hof. great piece by both of you. you guys stuck to the story and killed this. amazing piece. i liked johnny's verse just a little more but maybe im just biased. great drop. jaicee you surprised me. i hope this gets you guys into the hall of fame you deserve it.
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    ya that was tight good to the both of u guy's.....i liked it, nice vocab and structure to it....had nice lines and everything
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    Jai-Cee
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    Surprised you...? I guess I'm pleased about that...!?

    I've been dropping for about 3 years... So I'm surprised Im still wack... lol...

    Piece...

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    Very good read. Nice and lengthy too. Good vocab, solid structure and the flow was on point on both ends. The story had more depth than most I've read, makes it much more intriguing. Overall, nice drops, fellas. I'll be watching for more from the two of you.
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    Jai-Cee
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    So who is going to nominate it for HOF? If anyone...?

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    no not good enough for HOF, work a little bit more an u might have it a nominee but not this yet
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    Word is Bond Sublime D's Avatar
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    you have an invitation to Divine Diction, my elite poetry crew...

    im trying to get all teh dope old members of the site...

    you qualify...lol...

    ille dit with a response later
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    Jai-Cee
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    Who exactly is invited..?

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    i liked this piece...both mcs kept to the subject, ill flow, the structure was nice, and the vocab was there as well...its nice to read pieces like this in here...keep elevating dukes...one

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    Yea thos shit was tight...had me hangin off da edge of my seat waitin for tha next line. Mad props ta both of u. I can't really say much for improvement tha verse had it all....i was really feelin it. Keep droppin. Peaceezy.

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    yer i was feelin that tight yall .. good topic as well nice vocab structure ect ye well done

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    Jai-Cee
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    Boing... Straight to where it belongs...!

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    A very good piece by both of you...

    Imagery was there, and strong vocab from the pair of you...

    Obviously you two ain't amatuers when it comes to topical writing...

    I thought Jai-Cee came ever so slightly better than Johnny 6-Feet... But overall, it was one of the best pieces I've seen on this sight...
    Gone. Like Dust.

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    to the top

    you know reps will be appreciated.

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