vapour v frozen flame

[untold]

aight so its :

10 lines max

no feeding, biting, dick riding

spit by tomorrow midnight

dont mind who goes 1st so spit whenever before then

[untold]

aight well looks like you aint gonna spit any time soon so ill spit ....

Punches hittin as hard as jacko’s cock in a room of little naked girls,
Not understanding them … sending my mind into spirals and curls,
Shootin nothing but blanks … firing at tanks … don’t stand a chance,
You won’t get any where in rap unless your lines start to enhance,
Leave this kid lifeless and deceased … soul yet to be released,
Look at this noob ... what a fool trying to mess with this Lyrical Beast,
Just stop spitting on it … and just check the mics for the stars,
Stand back and observe me rip him with these lyrical bars,
We both spitting flames but yours are frozen, feeble and weak,
There more played than ya grandma … and she’s an antique.

[Frozen Flamez]

You throwing punches like da Downy Bear “snuggly soft”/
While my rhymes are so hot you need to have a heat stroke to cool off//
You have no say in da matter…u loss so take what you’ve been given/
Like prostitutes on da corners eating babies for a livin// ( swallowing nut)
You couldn’t “enhance” yo rhymes even with a synthesizer/
And the way you tame dis “Lyrical Beast” is wit my Verbal Tranquilizer//
400+ posts…man u over-rated/
If yo rhymes was yo d!ck you’ve just been castrated//
Diggin through yo prewritten shyt to find one that can counter my style/
I kind I might need to help you cuz dat may take a while//


Commence voting ~Ice~

[untold]

aight uppin on this shit .....


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[Reflect]

Vapour...

Punches hittin as hard as jacko’s cock in a room of little naked girls,
Not understanding them … sending my mind into spirals and curls,
Weak...
Shootin nothing but blanks … firing at tanks … don’t stand a chance,
You won’t get any where in rap unless your lines start to enhance,
Firing at tanks? what?
Leave this kid lifeless and deceased … soul yet to be released,
Look at this noob ... what a fool trying to mess with this Lyrical Beast,
Self glory and no punch.
Just stop spitting on it … and just check the mics for the stars,
Stand back and observe me rip him with these lyrical bars,
More self glory, and no punch.
We both spitting flames but yours are frozen, feeble and weak,
There more played than ya grandma … and she’s an antique.
Not too bad.



Frozen...

You throwing punches like da Downy Bear “snuggly soft”/
While my rhymes are so hot you need to have a heat stroke to cool off//
Self glory, no real punch.
You have no say in da matter…u loss so take what you’ve been given/
Like prostitutes on da corners eating babies for a livin// ( swallowing nut)
Weak.
You couldn’t “enhance” yo rhymes even with a synthesizer/
And the way you tame dis “Lyrical Beast” is wit my Verbal Tranquilizer//
No real punch again.
400+ posts…man u over-rated/
If yo rhymes was yo d!ck you’ve just been castrated//
Lol...not bad at all.
Diggin through yo prewritten shyt to find one that can counter my style/
I kind I might need to help you cuz dat may take a while//
Kinda weak, but ok.


Overall, Cold flame had 2 punches that i liked in this battle, where as vapour only had one (his closer). You both need to elevate and be more consistant with your punches, both flow were pretty decent...structure...but it was the personal that Frozen flame had that won him this battle for me.

No hate, juist honest vote.


v/ Frozen flame

[Frozen Flamez]

iight...I'm uppin da thread....1-0..........

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[Assazin]

Originally posted by:Vapour
Punches hittin as hard as jacko’s cock in a room of little naked girls,
Not understanding them … sending my mind into spirals and curls,
NOPE
Shootin nothing but blanks … firing at tanks … don’t stand a chance,
You won’t get any where in rap unless your lines start to enhance,
DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
Leave this kid lifeless and deceased … soul yet to be released,
Look at this noob ... what a fool trying to mess with this Lyrical Beast,
S.G. NO REAL PUNCH
Just stop spitting on it … and just check the mics for the stars,
Stand back and observe me rip him with these lyrical bars,
S.G. THIS TIME WAS WEAK AS FUCK
We both spitting flames but yours are frozen, feeble and weak,
There more played than ya grandma … and she’s an antique.
PROBLY YA ONLY BAR AND ENDING THAT HAD A PUNCH

you shit was cool but you got to throw some punch lines in there to attract
kat's focus of readin ya verse.

Originally posted by:Frozen Flames
You throwing punches like da Downy Bear “snuggly soft”/
While my rhymes are so hot you need to have a heat stroke to cool off//
WEAK S.G. WHICH MADE IT A WEAK OPENER
You have no say in da matter…u loss so take what you’ve been given/
Like prostitutes on da corners eating babies for a livin// ( swallowing nut)
NOPE
You couldn’t “enhance” yo rhymes even with a synthesizer/
And the way you tame dis “Lyrical Beast” is wit my Verbal Tranquilizer//
MEH
400+ posts…man u over-rated/
If yo rhymes was yo d!ck you’ve just been castrated//
AIGHT
Diggin through yo prewritten shyt to find one that can counter my style/
I kind I might need to help you cuz dat may take a while//
OK BUT COULD OF BEEN BETTER

ya shit was cool in a way but try to think of more creativity to attack your opponent aight then peace be still.

V/Frozen Flames
for tryin to attempt punches at least
good shit both of you though

hit the links back

[Buckz_Bytch]

ya lines were hot, ya punches were hot that shit was ill you got that boo.

vote, frozen flames.

[Reflect]

^Oh shut the fuck up.

[untold]

ya lines were hot, ya punches were hot that shit was ill you got that boo.

vote, frozen flames.

learn the fuck how to vote you cock !

uppin (2)

[untold]

uppin .....

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[Frozen Flamez]

We just need a few more votes come on people...we'll return da favor come on in and vote....uppin...

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[Johnny C.]

i'm votin for frozen flamez cuz he had a hella nice verse. that other guy just had no punches whatsoever (sorry). I mean, flamez coulda won with just his opener, with the snuggly soft line! good job to both, and vapor, keep workin on good punches.
v/ flames

ps. please hit up the battle in my link (i used up my ups, and i need one more vote)

[Demon Pyrokronix]

^Oh shut the fuck up.

LMFAO

Vapour

Punches hittin as hard as jacko’s cock in a room of little naked girls,
Not understanding them … sending my mind into spirals and curls,
(LMFAO, WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT? WEAK)
Leave this kid lifeless and deceased … soul yet to be released,
Look at this noob ... what a fool trying to mess with this Lyrical Beast,
(Lyrical beast? you? no)
Just stop spitting on it … and just check the mics for the stars,
Stand back and observe me rip him with these lyrical bars,
(I'm litterally laughing out loud now)
We both spitting flames but yours are frozen, feeble and weak,
There more played than ya grandma … and she’s an antique.
(by far you best bar... it made sense and at least ATTEMPTED to punch)

Frozen flame (lmao, nice name kid )

You throwing punches like da Downy Bear “snuggly soft”/
While my rhymes are so hot you need to have a heat stroke to cool off//
(no)
You have no say in da matter…u loss so take what you’ve been given/
Like prostitutes on da corners eating babies for a livin// ( swallowing nut)
(*snort* no punch)
You couldn’t “enhance” yo rhymes even with a synthesizer/
And the way you tame dis “Lyrical Beast” is wit my Verbal Tranquilizer//
(you fed off his bar... booooo)
400+ posts…man u over-rated/
If yo rhymes was yo d!ck you’ve just been castrated//
(lol, easily best line of the battle)
Diggin through yo prewritten shyt to find one that can counter my style/
I kind I might need to help you cuz dat may take a while//
(weak... really let you down after your last bar)

v/frozen flame for having a slightly more consistent and... dare I say it, "harder" hitting verse

[cutastraphe]

Bullshit i didn't....

my explanation is vapour ya flow was aight, stucture was aight, wrdplay was ok, but the punches were weak work on them and personals as well as bein more creative.

frozen ya had ok flow, ok structure as well, sum ok mulit's, better punches and ya got lil more personal but were much more creative.

vote-frozen

hit my shit up with a vote
thanx