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Thread: then and now

  1. #1
    "fi-del"
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    then and now

    1900

    ..peace was tranquial,a beast would thankyou for lending a hand..
    ..money wasnt a thing,no big deal,your not spending a grand
    ..man made machine's are yet to be created..
    ..never ever a time we done somthing we hated..
    ..thing's seemed calm and collective,only nature to battle..
    ..green surrounding's,living off the land,can you picture the cattle..
    ..we survived by doing thing's for ourself's,no machine's to use..
    ..good old home brew,is the only thing fien's abuse..
    ..drug's were not an issue,no such thing's as prescription's..
    ..police were normal citizen's,no such thing as conviction's..
    ..struggle's arent here,because money is not needed..
    ..we selling weat for meat,we love to meet and greet..
    ..no such thing's as land dispute's,no goverment or a tribunal..
    ..no tear's, just smile's and joy,even at a guy's funeral..
    ..we sort out problem's in a family council setting..
    ..everything we done we enjoy,never left sitting back and regreting..
    ..we dont work a nine to five for a boss at a minimal cost..
    but we do work to stay safe,otherwise family is lost
    ..but we love all and help one another out..
    ..no problem's when we come to a river,just find another route..




    2000

    ..war is at it's peak,and the beast is in command..
    ..money is the major issue,considered poor if you only got a grand..
    ..everything is machine's and artificial intelligance..
    ..at time's we do thing's,that seem like we gave hell a glance...
    ..fake media is what the goverment televised..
    ..we try surviving,but each time we put in effort,hell will rise..
    ..crack head's are converting our children into fiend's..
    ..being prescribed medicine,with a name we dont what it mean's..
    ..police are out of control with all there brutality..
    corner drug pusher's end being another fatality
    no one seem's happey,more tear's than smile's and joy
    thing's are crazy,cant understand why pedphile's deploy
    problem's arent sorted,just aborted to be locked up
    continuislly regreting our action's,hating that we fucked up
    working for minimal wage,it's a subliminal way
    of course we have love, but forced to put it aside
    when we come to a river,we just turn our back's and hide.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    it was good, more the less it should be in poetic scriptures, but its good solid structure and good wording
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    waddup Fi-Del

    people here don't know what TC mean man lol

    I critted this on RV..word

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156911
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156969



    indeph my homie, I no what's he's talking about..

    thnx for the feed 7th psalm

    ^^^for more

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    I like this piece, real creatve, good flow & multi's..

    ..good old home brew,is the only thing fien's abuse..
    ..drug's were not an issue,no such thing's as prescription's..
    ..police were normal citizen's,no such thing as conviction's..

    crazy how you compared the two, & did the two verses so similar w/ the difference.. def shouldnt be slept on.. good drop.. was worth me peepin'...

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    yo whats up fi-del lol its wierd cause im a hard out herb on rv's but here i have some knowledge ahahahaha any way good piece bro good flow, shit was real tight lyrically topic was aiight to but just to let you know i vote yes for you bein in hit n run

    psykosis aka the mad professor hit n run bitch we takin over

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    *^^^*

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    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157031

    return the favor and vote on my battle ^^^
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    *^^^*

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    Quote Originally Posted by .Indeph.
    waddup Fi-Del

    people here don't know what TC mean man lol

    I critted this on RV..word

    U SUCK HOE


    J/P DIS IS DRASTIC YA NIKKA HOMIE


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    ~street poetic~



    "Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
    Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
    Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
    And summer's lease hath all too short a date".



    Cowards die many times before their deaths; The valiant never taste of death but once.
    Of all the wonders that I yet have heard, it seems to me most strange that men should fear;
    Seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come".

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    yeah this rhyme was alright. it had good flow and structure. it couldve been better though. i think you got potential. 7/10

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