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Thread: Unique Resistance

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    Jai-Cee
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    Unique Resistance

    Unique Resistance

    Self vindictive, justifying an existence by fighting against an internal resistance…
    Unique in its persistence yet meaningless to those who can’t fathom its meanings…
    Just feelings, sentiments, elements of the soul that blossom like roses with thorns…
    Emotions become torn, and scorned in life, in this strife but in death we will mourn…
    Born with no fear, it just sears up pleasure to a measure that is identified with pain…
    No name, just struggling to stay sane and nothings changed were still the same…
    Who’s to blame, contempt at attempts to steady ourselves as we try to repent…
    Heaven scents smells of a unique stench that only hell has the capacity to vent…
    It’s meant to be effortless, but we all suffer from a certain internal emptiness…
    Were relentless in searching to find the path to a sanctuary to the road is endless…
    So fruitless in trying to acquire a connotation of life that were racing to die…
    Living a lie, with no time to rest standing to abide by natures laws that we deny…
    Why, a simple question with no uncomplicated answers, like payers unanswered…
    Unique resistance is chartered flights in the soul lounging with the departed…

    I've written this in a way that hopefully everyone will be able to draw their own meanings to it. Personally it means a lot to me, for reasons I wont elaborate on, but hey... Which probably makes it, in some narrow minded peoples opinion, vague . But give it some thought and you'll be able to appreciate the contradiction of the title - its not unique by any means... Deep...? I'll let you decide...

    Peace

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156680
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156629

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    nice homie...flow was lacking a bit but your multis were nice and meta's wuz there...keep it up dawg..

    EZ

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    def a gd drop, flow was nice but some lines were stretched
    lovin ya vocab adds flavour to this piece, nice level of complexity

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    Jai-Cee
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    Uppin.... #1

  5. #5
    Jai-Cee
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    Uppin for reps... Feedback please...

    Bump #2

  6. #6
    Jai-Cee
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    Back to the top like a floater...

    Blob...

  7. #7
    Jai-Cee
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    Whooosshh... Right back to the top...

    Rep people...!?

  8. #8
    Jai-Cee
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    Bump... Can we have some decent critique? Meh...

    Rising...

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    i liked it had a strong structure to it, had nice vocabulary also

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157031

    return the favor^^
    "ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
    ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!

    I AINT NO BITCH!

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    OG Poet, er some shit.
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    Nice. Good wording throughout it. I liked it
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    Jai-Cee
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    Last bounce. Goin up up n away...

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    i liked this rhyme yo, the flow was alright, but the multi's and meta's were good, thanks for the feedback on my old thread, but i would like to see more rhymes comin from you, you got something....peace out homie

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    nice piece....i like the topic of this verse...it was deep...i like the structure of the rhyme, the multis was nice and the metaphors was there...i like that shit that makes you think when you read it and your rhyme did that...kep elevating....one

  14. #14
    Jai-Cee
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    Appreciate the reps people... leave me links so I can critique yours...

    Peace

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    no-one gives big feedback anymore.

    this ones got all your tradmarks on it man. the strong vocab and imagery, a way out west concept and some multiple rhymes this time. very nice. i couldn't fathom the meaning of this piece personally, but i'm sure if i read and re-read it i could come to some conclusion.

    when are you gonna drop that verse for our 'black knights' collab? its been ages.

    keep posting, if you could rep one of mine (theres a million links in my sig) i'd appricaite it.

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