KrEaTiOn*nInE vsTheHandsOfGod

[TheHandsOfGod]

10 lines max
no dick rides
no hate votes
no crew votes
check in then post..
good luck

[Go Go Power Rangers]

check in..........................................

[Go Go Power Rangers]

can u really get any more relistic by challengin me?, can be generic battlin christs palms//
....i'll have me verses in his bible as quoted the best writtin the king kreation way with influenced psalms//
have u ever been to a sancuary?, mine will leave ur wounds diamond cut laced or pearled//
u've been touched by an act of god, but this time it was a lyrical one, the hands are wrapped around ur neck from me the 9th wonder of the world//
i'll re-read ur bullshit one million times, and still give u zero percent of improvment//
because i'll move ur words to your asshole so whats comin out ur mouth goes back in ur ass, how does it feel to be shitted on by myself as a ''mass movement''//
injecting colder shit into ur mind and u can bite them and use them on a different site, my tongue has taste buds as slurpies//
get off my own vegatation as i feed on herbs like u, cuz ur on my dick and more annoying then herpes//
i'll under rate ur own disabilities with an nc-17 for ur immature approaches on sexual graphics//
simplify my own brain and give it to u in the long run, but if this kid dies by something of a different blood line we'll just have the affiliation tital them unhealthy kreation mathmatics

[Go Go Power Rangers]

''may the delecacy victores end up with the murk in their grasp''

^

[Go Go Power Rangers]

go yung'n.........1/2 hour due......................

[Go Go Power Rangers]

ok man guess not *CLOSE*............................

[Go Go Power Rangers]

ya u should spit cuz i see ur on....**************

[TheHandsOfGod]

Quit bitchin…leme key something so you don’t cry anymore..Cough Cough……


Gods hands grab ya neck n grip,ya chest n shit,n put ya throat inside..
…….leme draw the line…
Cuz this is the closest,you’ll get to unfinished raw talent,is were are post devied..
This flyweight creates nine,well god will destroy nine lives,to murk this pussy
Cuz hands deals more decks to ur side,then playin cards with rookies..
Ill disect this bitch,n fuck with this kreation so much,worse that he already is
Cuz the star between ya name,is the closest to god you’ll ever get…
Like artes quitin to rap,atleast he went out with a bang or even connected a punch
Gods hands will grip n consume this kid quick like candy,you runt..
This is my second battle out the mist,n already im 2-0...n ready to quit kid
Cuz this battle became a vision of of winnin,the moment you checked in it…


Damn I hate text..lol..

[Go Go Power Rangers]

iight uppin.................vote it up yall.........

[Go Go Power Rangers]

come on people we needs votes...i'll return the favor

[Go Go Power Rangers]

why is my name go go power rangers!!!!! wtf man c'mon change it back

[Go Go Power Rangers]

change my name back to its normal one plz......c'mon now.....KrEaTiOn*nInE...plz change it back.....why did yall give me that name anyways

[Ack Scent]

Kreation, very long lines it would be better to shorten them, but still a nice flow wit a couple of punches, not bad wit the rhyme scheme either.

HandsofGod, better punchlines and good rhyming scheme, and the bars were shorter.

My vote=HandOfGod, for better punches and rhymes.

hit up the links in my sig and check out my battles.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial

[Go Go Power Rangers]

iiight................umm......have different feelins but ok

[Go Go Power Rangers]

change my fuckin nameback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!