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Thread: Pro Pain

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    Pro Pain

    A man wakes up in hand cuffs,
    "tough luck bud,"
    "but I..." -
    "enough son...
    "what have I done?"
    "shut up!"
    "dont I get one..."
    "ha, tell it to the judge."


    "what happened?"... drunken anger aided his conscienceless fists
    insisting rage had led to this, clenched palms foreseeing a deathwish
    red visions of which had shadowed his sight to fights judgement
    resenting his situation, disgraced in his incasement of wet cement
    torment present, hardening his heart to calloused scars of violence
    malevolence scent tasted in the air, fairness said nothing, again...

    "why me?"... questions lingered in his laments of oppression
    a siloute of darkness danced across a backdrop of innocents
    poverty played off-broadway, day after day with no audience
    applause only heard by gunshots, sirens, and screaming citizens.
    karate had become an outlet, meant to deffend his self purpose
    reclaiming what was taken from each back break of worthlessness.

    "how come?"... he couldnt defend the intent of killing himself or another
    mother asked questions, while he basked in fantasy summers of wonder
    other people didnt see the evil veiled in the sunset of every day's blunders
    and she agreed beauty was skin deep, never even caring to peak under.
    he said he loved her. she knew it wasn't true, but who else would care
    for her heart was barren, and even a wasteland was better than thin air...

    "Court is now is session"

    "Where were"...police, who heard the screams from the apartment window
    fearing the worst knowing this wasnt the first burst of visible acts of sorrow
    from growing up painting fight's art of karate, to becoming a trained killer
    to breaking trust's pillar, not knowing the difference in knowledge's power.
    his hate escalated, self destruction imploaded and love became a stranger
    only at home, pro pain ignites the fine line fused between abuse and anger.

    the government couldnt lock him away, justice woke up dazed, in dismay
    lawyers pleaded the insanity of humanity claiming society wasnt his liability.
    reason's jury didnt find him guilty, and let him scour in lifes filthy wilderness
    his fists hit the jackpot, never stopping, he dealt undeserved hurt handedly

    and its convieced, she's still able to heal to this day
    and its decieved, he'll still love her... another day
    and its believed, she still bleeds in vain each day
    and its percieved, he still lives free... to this day.
    A ruthless
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    links coming.
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    up. sorry about the link situation, working on it.
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    shit was dope yooo, I liked the whole imagery/creative structure u put into this, u seem to be a great writer, and ill be looking forward to more of your pieces.

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    ^appreciated.
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    This whole thing was cool, the flow never came off point even with the complicated wording, the whole story behind it was cool, and like that other dude said the imagrey that you picture in your head when your reading this makes this a nice verse...

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