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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    never fall off

    My next album is coming with free lubrication…. And a mask/
    So u don’t see shit coming when I cram it up your ass/
    In a vast community/where everybody think being “mass ill” carry no immunity/
    I vaccinate plagues/eradicate heads/
    Leave emcees indecently exposed- like public nudity.
    Everybody be like “yeah he ill with script, flips with the writ”
    How come he aint fucken with other clicks? I aint gay bitch
    Match the DNA on these crews dicks /now u see how they feeling each other’s shit.
    I don’t need a squad that mob and caters to my ego/
    I need some fools that are equal/and evil/That play off each other like they were sequels.
    Spit flows that drown the globe like a religious experience/
    Then cock block all your fucking thoughts like your girls’ periods.
    Raw lyrics force-feeding you plenty metaphors/ yawl can’t handle any more/
    When I call for war/I spots get blown like cell phone detonators strapped to c-4//
    My 1st version/kills with no rehearsing/ son you in the 1st then abort you in 3rd person.
    A lot of yawl say I’ve lost my edge/how is that I been giving you 20 min written off the head.
    50 percent spitting I seen bitten in pen ink and led/so if it isn’t hating then its envy instead.
    While the art of emcee is steadily dying/you ask what the state of hip hop and treat it like a trend/
    Tell me I you aint a copy lying to everyone cause you can tell u want to be me him and them.
    That’s why I stay me no matter my pseudonym/while you stay sudo to being a male lesbian.
    And fuck your friends I don’t care who I offend/they aint here/
    Now the only ends/im concerned with is finishing your career.
    Inflicting disaster/infecting with cancer/anthrax and subliminal content/
    After me your cd cover will be titled blah blah who cares im almost as good as NONCENTZ.
    HIT N RUN the family not just a team/are exactly what we seam/
    Netcees who cant get on the m.i.c cause we to ill and quarantined.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    uppin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    this was pretty tight, you always have a good flow..

    but you fell off to me in the begging picked up in the middle, fell off alittle, but picked up..
    u seem to have a unique style, with alot of rhyming, and thats how I like it..
    keep it coming..

    Please return the favor:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154803

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    well ounchlines was my focus with this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i didnt like it. no direction
    no topic
    no fucking skill.

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    i liked and i loved the 3rd person line ut towards the end it started getting a little weak but it was still hot, also u should try to spell batter and structure it better also. it was good tho man. return the favor at mine, The Hardest Heart

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    Listen...

    You have the skill, cause
    of your vocabulary and
    your originality.
    Your flow is always on point.
    You must and this is a must,
    work on your structure. Neatness
    helps out a lot. Your metaphors are
    pretty good. Everything is somewhat
    good. But your structure seriously kills
    it. Nice vocabulary some lines you had
    nice points.



    Peace

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    structure? dawg most of my structure is only how i spit i use slow to fast deliveries and it makes hardm for me to type any other method
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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