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    Mindless Self-Engulfed In Moniker's Avatar
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    Interlude

    Interlude

    Knowledge is blasted out of minds like amplifiers,
    rhymed and produced over truth's two turntables.
    Ideas transmit beats through these hidden cables,
    serene melodies capture poverties implied words.

    "Yes, yes, ya'll."
    ..and freedom freefalls.
    "but ya dont..."

    Stop.

    Thoughts just mosh into many lost crowded bodies
    Creating naked pits of ego's with few true survivors
    A guitarist's solo sold halo's but pulled soul's trigger
    Branding scarred youth on all viewing new humanity

    (Melodic riffs rift fate
    Mic check, 1 - too late
    the beat faints...)

    Society rightly forgot to time signature this rhythm
    since It can't be measured by any mans metronome
    Musical dreams are now heard, if only in monotone
    Sterotypes still blaring beliefs in soundproof schisms

    Heartbeat: Stop
    Music: Shot

    Headphones: Off
    A ruthless
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    read it. i'll reply tomorrow.
    Last edited by Toil; November 11th, 2004 at 11:47 PM

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    lol. i actually liked this Mind. creating reality with assumptions,
    that is so original.
    anyways, your vocabulary was superb and partook a huge part in this peice. you know what im sayin?
    it flowed very well, and structure fitted in well also. you understand what im sayin?
    anyways, i liked reading this peice, and would like to read more aswell.
    nice work Mind. keep doing what you do.
    be strong and stay strong man.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154671

    Return......Thanx.

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    thanks marek, ill go read yours.
    A ruthless
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    of everything existing.
    Po'ethics
    abstanticollective.

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    i saw real talent here something that can grab almost any hip hop head i think you did very well here stay up
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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