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Killa_Instinct
$tyle/$witch
10 Lines
No D.r/Feeding/Crew Votes
Verses Due By 2:00 A.M. Eastern Time
..When You Say You Killa Instinct It Puts Me In Suspension..
..Cuz The Only Pink Slip You'll Accept Is For Detention..
..Puncturing Pores into Ya Rectum,Stupid Pedestrian..
..Re-Capping The Election By Blowin Out Ya Intestines..
..Sending Punches To Ya Dome,Reinverting To Killa Instincts..
..Severe Artillery Isn't Necessary When I Can Kill Ya With Ink..
..Ya Lyrics Couldn't "Cum Out" A-Head If You
..Were To Give A Blow With Notes..
..Ya Lyrical Mentality Is So Wack That I'll Close With Jokes..
..Handing You A Line_______,Would Damage Ya Mind..
..Heres A Suggestion,My Instinct Says You'll Lose through This Line..
Quick Key..Nuttin Special...
u ass forgot to say no feeding but unlike most bitches in rb, i keep my shit fresh.. get ready boy.........
the return.. came back for sum respect, unwanted bitch
style this........ remove those $ outta ur nik, makes ur poor ass sound rich
u tryna act big wit the vocab ur dictionary is using
but watch out cause if u that dumb it mite be u who ur abusing
poor fillers u use, thats y ur ass isnt heard
ill leave underground hoe like a fresh flushed turd
and thats y ur switch should be off at all precautions
cause ur ass should be dead,, but u were born b4 abortion
so u wanna end with jokes, then i mite end with a filler
finishing driller........................
im not fuked or played cause i am the killer...
in 1 line its::: ill leave "u" underground hoe like a fresh flushed turd.... lol 4got dat.....
ny way nice battle and votes up cumon dont sleep on this....
I Did Say No Feeding...Uppin Fo Votes.............
^^ For Votes..Please Vote..I Promise I'll Return The Favor..
$tyle-
..When You Say You Killa Instinct It Puts Me In Suspension..
..Cuz The Only Pink Slip You'll Accept Is For Detention..
**bad flow, not especially hard hitting, but good rhyme
..Puncturing Pores into Ya Rectum,Stupid Pedestrian..
..Re-Capping The Election By Blowin Out Ya Intestines..
*flow improved, but punch got weaker, as did the rhyme
..Sending Punches To Ya Dome,Reinverting To Killa Instincts..
..Severe Artillery Isn't Necessary When I Can Kill Ya With Ink..
**rhyme still weak, but punch and flow improved
..Ya Lyrics Couldn't "Cum Out" A-Head If You
..Were To Give A Blow With Notes..
..Ya Lyrical Mentality Is So Wack That I'll Close With Jokes..
** simple rhyme, not hard hitting, but good flow
..Handing You A Line_______,Would Damage Ya Mind..
..Heres A Suggestion,My Instinct Says You'll Lose through This Line..
*simple rhyme, simple finisher, this is too safe
killa-
the return.. came back for sum respect, unwanted bitch
style this........ remove those $ outta ur nik, makes ur poor ass sound rich
* awkward flow, and simple rhyme, not good for openers
u tryna act big wit the vocab ur dictionary is using
but watch out cause if u that dumb it mite be u who ur abusing
* aight this doesnt make enough sense, and another simple rhyme
poor fillers u use, thats y ur ass isnt heard
ill leave underground hoe like a fresh flushed turd
* very simple, very played
and thats y ur switch should be off at all precautions
cause ur ass should be dead,, but u were born b4 abortion
NO STARS a very weak rhyme, tion rhymes go two beat, this is unoriginal
so u wanna end with jokes, then i mite end with a filler
finishing driller........................
im not fuked or played cause i am the killer...
NO STARS self glorification does not fly with me
TOTALS:
$tyle- 8stars/5bars= 1.600 (C-)
killa- 3stars/5bars= 0.600 (D-)
VOTE/$tyle
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
btw please hit me back and vote on my battle with LsD, I need votes, and I vote a lot for people who vote on my battles a lot, thanks, happy elevatin boys
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The glass isn't half empty, it's one third full...
but I wouldn't drink that anyway, it's mostly backwash.
Good Looks I Just Voted On Ya Battle...Lookin Fo Mo Votes..I'll Return The Favor..
vote on this shit........
Vote On Otha Peoples Ish To Kid...Thats The Reason They Won't Vote Shiat....Please Vote And Trust I Will Return The Favor..I've Already Dun It Like I said I Would..^^
up...(links)
Style/Switch kicked this killer this time fo sho! I ain't hurt shit like since Will Smith! You rock man!! I wish I could be like you..good style/flow/ the whole shit! This votes going for Style!
Pretty good battle here guys...
Styles-...You had a nice verse i thought...Structure was very nice, one of the things i noticed at first lol...Had great flow to it i thought which helped make it nice and easy to follow along with...You had nice multies in there which complimented the flow of your piece...also you had nice punches in there...I liked the opening bar it was pretty cool i thought...closer was alright...overall a nice verse.
Killa-...You had a decent verse as well...flow in the piece was pretty good i thought...but some of your lines were played like the turd line but thats alright though...had some decent punches though....structure was alright some of the lines seemed kinda stretched compared to the other lines but its still cool though...But overall it was a alright verse.
Overall: It was a nice battle I thought...but my vote is going to Style for having better punches and better flow in his verse which made it stand out more to me.
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Thanks For The Votes Guys.....Uppin For 2 More Votes And The K.O....Take The Time To Vote..Drop Links ANd i'll Return The Favor
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