20- 25 lines
same rules as apply in ne other battle
due in at 3
Trickback
gangstar
20- 25 lines
same rules as apply in ne other battle
due in at 3
ive had mine ready since this morining so here ya go
aight i dont get it i beat u like 3 time u ''want some more''?/
so ima juss walk right through like u was a ''broken door''/
u think u gon beat me u betta go take some tips from ''southside''/
everytime i spit a verse i leave niggas ''mouthwide''/
to beat u b!tch thats the ''call tonight''/
u juss been a failure and been rejected ''all your life''/
when u battlin me u betta use ya ''head''/
u want me to spit first so u can juss make a verse about all what i ''said?/
i told u nigga who got the rap title ''its me''/
but i aint gonna tell everybody else that ur ''idle is me''/
who the f*ck u think u are coming on here ''testin me''/
im spittin so much fire stop this and blow the whistle like u a ''refferee''/
are u dumb nigga what the hell u dont ''understand''/
u bein succesfull in this battle is like a qb throwin a ''underhand''/
me spittin fire yea thats it so u should ''expect it''/
like old fruits i kno ur whole verse gonna be ''neglected''/
yea if u wanna see me again nah i dont wanna ''go there''/
after readin my verse ur brain crampin u need to go grab some ''fresh air'/
chekin in......ill drop now.......................
you pre-write ya verses so they versus anyone, whus wrong wit ya...
and I notive u write medical verses, cause that shit cures insomnia...
then ya go 18 lines not even followin ya own rules....
ya stabbin ya self before I even pulled out my sword to dual....
and yet this fool is in a crew named H'N'R...
never heard? they about as popular as electric cars....
even if you was Paul Newman you wouldnt know "the color of money"...
so I take ya crewmen as undercooked eggz, soft and 'run'ny...
its funny how every kid wants to claim Gangsta but they just 'type'-o's'...
the closest u come to hard is "General", but thas because ya blood type's-O...
so 'oh no' ya like a Merry-go-round when ya keep on spinnin...
ya gonna be the next RB Santa Claus from the wins ya 'keep on givin'...
im sayin ya sinnin, and this is only the beginnin'...
no wonder vets like BTK can keep on winnin...
ya like vegas kid, cept youll never gain...
me the NGC will make sure you never spit again...
HI THERE IM NEW we all-ready knew...
from the second you wrote "SAME RULES"...
but its cool, ya already made a big enough fool of ya-self...
like Dan Akroyd in "Trading Places" I took away your self wealth...
Uppin.....Dont sleep on this plz, vote and ill return the favor, pay attention to word play
UPPIN # 2 Vote and ill return the favor with good commentary......pay attention to wordplay DONT SLEEP ON THIS
UPPIN #3 goddamnit people vote on this fuckingbattle, and I will RETURN THE FAVOR
v/trickback
better flow and vocabulary!!!!!! Easy win
UPPPPPPIN # 1 come on ppl vote on this shit
1-0 Trickback
Uppin #4 For Rb Sake Will You Fucking Vote On This Battle Motherfuckers? Thank You. Ill Return The Motherfucking Favor
Yea kinda an easy vote...........trickback has skill...while the Gangstarr has nothing..............plus where did you think of that name Gangstar from Gangstarr very creative...........but what every.......i liked tricks santaclaus line.........and a bunch of others im just too lazy to scroll back up.......and good vocab trick..........
v/ TRICK
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GREAT BATTLE I LOVED EVERY RHYME actually u both sucked
this was an easy win by trick back better flow with his rhymes and word play was better
Uppin #5, but hey admins, let me up more ok? Motherfuckers is sleepin on this. They vote but cant poll..........