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No Biting, Recycling, or Feeding
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Good luck bro...
10 Lines
No Crew, Hate, or D/r Votes
No Biting, Recycling, or Feeding
10 minutes to check, 20 minutes to drop
Good luck bro...
Aight man, I'm checkin' in, I'm bout to key my shit up in a minute...
check
and i'm going after you, as stated in the bitch slapped thread.
(damn no edit button in front lines)
I'll spit metaphors that fuck up ya brain, straight retard ya health
And since ya name is "Booty Fan" we can all see you d/r yaself
You only hard when you take pipe like folks packin' hash, man
Rep New Jersey? You need ya rhymes "thrown back" in the trash can
You said make a short drop time, thought I'd be a quick rippin'
But before I set it up you Nas'd ya verse...It Was Written
You trippin', like dyslexic kids tryin' to recite Twista verses
Spittin' hearses, I broguth ya death, for no charge 'cuz this kid is worthless
Exposed ya herbness, you got "Jacked, Son" but we ai't thinkin' you is Michael
Besides, you handle bars about as good as a unicycle
This kid love conformity.....and he adores college...
So I squeeze herb brains like oranges...
...just ta get pure knowledge!
our four fathers, they all fought for our independence...
I'll blast a Colt 45..
..& u'll wear holes in ya chest like Indy pendants
He depends on medics....you get help from cardiac arrest
fists leave u wit dents,
...& ur dazed, it's to hard'a act impressed
so just save it for last, ya lines been played in the past
like a high school football field,
...& each little blade of the grass!
I'm runnin over u slurred spit, challenge me I'm crushin nerd kids
I said "shoot heroin u'll be dope"....and then this fuckin herb did!
ehh
ok.....PK
I'll spit metaphors that fuck up ya brain, straight retard ya health
And since ya name is "Booty Fan" we can all see you d/r yaself
lol.....liked thiz dawg
You only hard when you take pipe like folks packin' hash, man
Rep New Jersey? You need ya rhymes "thrown back" in the trash can
decent....ehh
You said make a short drop time, thought I'd be a quick rippin'
But before I set it up you Nas'd ya verse...It Was Written
nice
You trippin', like dyslexic kids tryin' to recite Twista verses
Spittin' hearses, I broguth ya death, for no charge 'cuz this kid is worthless
set up was sick mane...but punch was weak
Exposed ya herbness, you got "Jacked, Son" but we ai't thinkin' you is Michael
Besides, you handle bars about as good as a unicycle
good finisher
booty
This kid love conformity.....and he adores college...
So I squeeze herb brains like oranges...
...just ta get pure knowledge!
tight.....!!
our four fathers, they all fought for our independence...
I'll blast a Colt 45..
..& u'll wear holes in ya chest like Indy pendants
ehhhh.....ok
He depends on medics....you get help from cardiac arrest
fists leave u wit dents,
...& ur dazed, it's to hard'a act impressed
blah...and you talked about yoself
so just save it for last, ya lines been played in the past
like a high school football field,
...& each little blade of the grass!
nice......
I'm runnin over u slurred spit, challenge me I'm crushin nerd kids
I said "shoot heroin u'll be dope"....and then this fuckin herb did!
nah...average
vote = pure K
aight lt me break it down
PURE!!!
I'll spit metaphors that fuck up ya brain, straight retard ya health
And since ya name is "Booty Fan" we can all see you d/r yaself
(alright)
You only hard when you take pipe like folks packin' hash, man
Rep New Jersey? You need ya rhymes "thrown back" in the trash can
(ok)
You said make a short drop time, thought I'd be a quick rippin'
But before I set it up you Nas'd ya verse...It Was Written
(nice)
You trippin', like dyslexic kids tryin' to recite Twista verses
Spittin' hearses, I broguth ya death, for no charge 'cuz this kid is worthless
(so-so)
Exposed ya herbness, you got "Jacked, Son" but we ai't thinkin' you is Michael
Besides, you handle bars about as good as a unicycle
(good mutha fukn closer)
BOOTY FAN!!!
This kid love conformity.....and he adores college...
So I squeeze herb brains like oranges...
...just ta get pure knowledge!
(nice open)
our four fathers, they all fought for our independence...
I'll blast a Colt 45..
..& u'll wear holes in ya chest like Indy pendants
(wasnt feelin it)
He depends on medics....you get help from cardiac arrest
fists leave u wit dents,
...& ur dazed, it's to hard'a act impressed
(wack)
so just save it for last, ya lines been played in the past
like a high school football field,
...& each little blade of the grass!
(uh ok i guess)
I'm runnin over u slurred spit, challenge me I'm crushin nerd kids
I said "shoot heroin u'll be dope"....and then this fuckin herb did!
(reliable close, nice finish)
im gonna go with the newb pure. he showed more contempt in winning this battle and also used heavy pnches to throw booty overboard.. good battle by both and good luck..
v/pure
in return plz vote in my battle, the BOTH of uze. thnx!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151677
uppn?
Not a bad battle here guys...
Pure:
You had some good lines that i liked...I liked your finisher that was a good bar though, Made me laugh which is always a plus here...I just didnt like the way you structured it that much, and some of your lines didnt really work that well though..maybe a little better wording would have set it off much more...But you did have some decent lines...You did have some good multies towards the end which i like multies so thats a plus as well for you...But overall i thought it was ok some of the punches you did could have been better though. But still decent.
Booty:
You had a nice verse overall...Your opener was pretty solid and hard hitting, Nice very nice opener...some of the lines could have been worded a little different i think to make more sense but i got most of your lines though after i thought about a few of them for a second which is still ok with me...had some nice multies scattered in there which i liked multies so yeah...Liked your structure better than Pure's though, just looked better overall....Your flow was better overall i thought, pure's was kinda worded wrong at spots which threw it off but still...Overall nice verse.
Overall: It was a close one i thought...both came with good punches and both came with some funky bars and wording...but overall id have to give this one to Booty Fan for having some better punches in his verse. Close battle though.
Vote- Booty Fan
Well I'm tryin' to find someone who can help me elevate, but thanks for the feedback dawg. Uppin'...Originally Posted by Credz
Aight, uppin' this shit for some more votes y'all...
uppppn 2
I'll spit metaphors that fuck up ya brain, straight retard ya health
And since ya name is "Booty Fan" we can all see you d/r yaself
-ok start
You only hard when you take pipe like folks packin' hash, man
Rep New Jersey? You need ya rhymes "thrown back" in the trash can
-decent
You said make a short drop time, thought I'd be a quick rippin'
But before I set it up you Nas'd ya verse...It Was Written
-ok
You trippin', like dyslexic kids tryin' to recite Twista verses
Spittin' hearses, I broguth ya death, for no charge 'cuz this kid is worthless
-nice setup, ok punch
Exposed ya herbness, you got "Jacked, Son" but we ai't thinkin' you is Michael
Besides, you handle bars about as good as a unicycle
pretty good finish
This kid love conformity.....and he adores college...
So I squeeze herb brains like oranges...
...just ta get pure knowledge!
pretty good start
our four fathers, they all fought for our independence...
I'll blast a Colt 45..
..& u'll wear holes in ya chest like Indy pendants
-ok, didnt hit that hard though
He depends on medics....you get help from cardiac arrest
fists leave u wit dents,
...& ur dazed, it's to hard'a act impressed
-not feelin it
so just save it for last, ya lines been played in the past
like a high school football field,
...& each little blade of the grass!
-nice
I'm runnin over u slurred spit, challenge me I'm crushin nerd kids
I said "shoot heroin u'll be dope"....and then this fuckin herb did!
-ok
this was a very close battle both had good flow and structure, but Bootyfans verse was more witty, and he he tried to be creative, Knowledge's verse was more of the same although i did like ur finisher, but the rest of ur punches were jus decent throughout the battle, u have to be more consistent with punches and bring more creativity to each one, humor also helps, but this battle goes to Booty fan for an overall better verse.
VOTE: BOOTYFAN, and since u can poll vote and ur online i expect u to return the favor
Artificial Intelligence
^ i shall...
uppp3