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  1. October 15th, 2004, 08:36 PM #1
    NoLost4Rhymes
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    Nice While It Lasted

    topic:It was nyce while it lasted..


    It was just another regular literal, ritual day..
    writting my original, lyrical, verse in mah spiritual place..
    A place where there are trees from tallest to shortest...
    Empty of tourest, Im alone in my own paradise forest...
    It's nyce n private, its quiet more slilent then silenced..
    Unknown Creator behind it, Gods Heaven Defines it..
    This creation is wut gives me my great inspirations...
    Empty of hate temptaions, soul warmed by the insilation...
    Had no preperations to have my eyes full of this amazment..
    Nothing better then this beautiful place to be placed in..
    But it burned down too black, full of darkness n ashes..
    Bein here short i take for granted, but nyce while it lasted...
    Mah Hott Audios:
    (This is my first one..pretty good for a first
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  2. October 15th, 2004, 08:44 PM #2
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    this piece is good,complex and good vocab,nice verse keep it up....the concept was ill very original like old school style with a spice of poetry.........hit my latest open mic up.....march 9(as the rain falls) verse 2.....thx -1-
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  3. October 15th, 2004, 09:57 PM #3
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  4. October 15th, 2004, 11:11 PM #4
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    yo hit me up for collab this was blazijng
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  5. October 15th, 2004, 11:14 PM #5
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    The poetry was nice and so was the vocabulary but the topic was pretty shit..
    In all that was aight
    WASSUP


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