8-12
u spit
no deadline just make sure u show
no bs votes
no d/r
drop links
word gl tab
8-12
u spit
no deadline just make sure u show
no bs votes
no d/r
drop links
word gl tab
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yep.. expect this saturday.. coverin tonight for a friend..
whenever ur ready .
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1000+ posts in 2 months.. forgive me for sayin your life's the net guy..
...Why?
Every time you shut off your comp.. your life flashes before ur eyes..
Wow man, big step, battling a non-newb.. Feelin Lucky today?..
Kid thought he'd scratch out a win.. oh wait.. over 18 to play..
Think your an opponent to me? Psh.. just another passer-by..
You winnin would be blind luck.. the way im takin out the 'I'..
Throwin this battle in a safe.. still wouldnt have it on lock..
Safe to call this kid a square? the way he'd sig a brain inside a box..
Kid hardly smells like trouble.. and I havent taken a wiff..
Kids idea of good imagery..is saving your work as .gif
Fuck Im done with this bitch.. kid was a waste of my time..
Questions? Comments? refer to the previous 8 lines..
There's 12 for ya, g/l.
2 days to write ok.. ill kill it..i mean key it
pmin me, askin my whereabouts...no clue, what u dis-sin
no sense of belonging, so like dicks in him... he tries to fit-in
ima go auto fire..no matter how many the heat holds...
confident u gonna win? get penalized like pete rose
u wack.. im above tab..like the escape tool
cuz my lyrics merk hardcore "em" fans..like a duet with jewel (the stan song)
answerin my thread...easy wins..u just hyped the don
cuz even when i half ass..im on top, kinda like ur moms (like i was on top fuckin her and my ass was showin lol)
ima rip this clown..break him down, to particles
cuz what kinda newbish dork..names himself after. newspaper-articles
u asked-me? how to battle..i show u fast-b
punches left u mangled...leavin indents wherever tab-keys
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i didnt like Tab Lloyds Structure the bars were all fucked up, and i just wasnt feeling anything about ur verse...
Hova- Good structure... punches..
i just liked yours overall better i liked the opener and closer good way to open it and good way to seal the deal..
Good job to the both of you but Tab i just wasnt feeling ur verse.
V/ hova.
MondoThugs.
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Meta. Convicts
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Tab Lloyd...
1000+ posts in 2 months.. forgive me for sayin your life's the net guy..
...Why?
Every time you shut off your comp.. your life flashes before ur eyes..
decent...
Wow man, big step, battling a non-newb.. Feelin Lucky today?..
Kid thought he'd scratch out a win.. oh wait.. over 18 to play..
not feelin it
Think your an opponent to me? Psh.. just another passer-by..
You winnin would be blind luck.. the way im takin out the 'I'..
could of been better but ehh ok
Throwin this battle in a safe.. still wouldnt have it on lock..
Safe to call this kid a square? the way he'd sig a brain inside a box..
set up is played punch was a nice personal.
Kid hardly smells like trouble.. and I havent taken a wiff..
Kids idea of good imagery..is saving your work as .gif
could of been better...ok though
Fuck Im done with this bitch.. kid was a waste of my time..
Questions? Comments? refer to the previous 8 lines..
ok ending.
I-Hova
pmin me, askin my whereabouts...no clue, what u dis-sin
no sense of belonging, so like dicks in him... he tries to fit-in
played.
ima go auto fire..no matter how many the heat holds...
confident u gonna win? get penalized like pete rose
dont like it...not feeling it much at all
u wack.. im above tab..like the escape tool
cuz my lyrics merk hardcore "em" fans..like a duet with jewel (the stan song)
i get it so no need to explain...good though
answerin my thread...easy wins..u just hyped the don
cuz even when i half ass..im on top, kinda like ur moms (like i was on top fuckin her and my ass was showin lol)
no.
ima rip this clown..break him down, to particles
cuz what kinda newbish dork..names himself after. newspaper-articles
uhh no.
u asked-me? how to battle..i show u fast-b
punches left u mangled...leavin indents wherever tab-keys
decent.
i see tab winning this for coming less played and more creative with
fresher concepts...hova you had one good line that i liked, but when
you started to explain your punches in those brackets it just made me
lose interest in reading you verse like you thinking your readers are completly
dumb...Tab wins for a better overall verse and harder hitting punches.
V/ Tab Lloyd.
return the favor when i get a battle up...so be on a look out...biznatches.
im gonna give this to tab cause of his punches.. his structure wasnt bad but hovas was way betta in a sence that the lines werent stretched out too much.. overall nice rhymes by both and good luk to both
v/tab
aight,
Tab, i was really feelin u the first 6 lines, then u kinda fell off...but i still think u had good concepts throughout, the punches were good...n the opener was a very strong personal...
Hova, i thought u did good too, but i thought a lot of ya lines were played out...def not your best here...but i did like your closer... anywayz...
V/ Tab, fo a mo consistent n mo creative verse IMO
BTW, i'm pretty damn sure that the stan song was Em n Dido, not Jewel...
yo i need an HONEST vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147028
yo in return of my vote can yaz return tha favor by votin here please!!! thnx peeps.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148884
Tab Lloyd:
1000+ posts in 2 months.. forgive me for sayin your life's the net guy..
...Why?
Every time you shut off your comp.. your life flashes before ur eyes..
lol nice opener
Wow man, big step, battling a non-newb.. Feelin Lucky today?..
Kid thought he'd scratch out a win.. oh wait.. over 18 to play..
ok
Think your an opponent to me? Psh.. just another passer-by..
You winnin would be blind luck.. the way im takin out the 'I'..
nice wordplay
Throwin this battle in a safe.. still wouldnt have it on lock..
Safe to call this kid a square? the way he'd sig a brain inside a box..
blah didn't like it
Kid hardly smells like trouble.. and I havent taken a wiff..
Kids idea of good imagery..is saving your work as .gif
ok
Fuck Im done with this bitch.. kid was a waste of my time..
Questions? Comments? refer to the previous 8 lines..
lol ok closer
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I-Hova:
pmin me, askin my whereabouts...no clue, what u dis-sin
no sense of belonging, so like dicks in him... he tries to fit-in
weak and played
ima go auto fire..no matter how many the heat holds...
confident u gonna win? get penalized like pete rose
no
u wack.. im above tab..like the escape tool
cuz my lyrics merk hardcore "em" fans..like a duet with jewel (the stan song)
ok
answerin my thread...easy wins..u just hyped the don
cuz even when i half ass..im on top, kinda like ur moms (like i was on top fuckin her and my ass was showin lol)
ok
ima rip this clown..break him down, to particles
cuz what kinda newbish dork..names himself after. newspaper-articles
no
u asked-me? how to battle..i show u fast-b
punches left u mangled...leavin indents wherever tab-keys
ok closer
Vote Tab i liked his punches and he had better concepts he didn't come played like Hova. Hova verse was ok but alot of played concepts.
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148349
Uppity up up, uppity up up look at frosty gooo0o0o! haha
ewwww at this battle re-mizzatch in order??
good verse mehh i thought i won but dont u always
good battle mayne ok some1 close this
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Tab- You had a good verse and a few good personal, the only thing is it was boring to read a little, you had maybe 2 lines that made me laugh. U had decent flow though
Hova- Man i done seen you drop harder than this man, your punches were weak and wasnt really hittin, but the shit was kinda witty, and i at least liked it a little.U had pretty good flow 2
V/Hova
Please return the favor by voting on one of the battles in my sig
^ Lol..
And yea Hova, rematchiZzle would be cool with me. Kinda get tired of seeing all the Tab lines, but ur closer was tight.
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